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The Cave

Contributed by georgelynyrd920 on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 02:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Staring into the deep holes of hell
while they look back into me
whispering, calling, screaming
but only shadows i can see.

Mystery seeps into my body
Horrible sensations arise
Pitiful lonely secrets
Fearlessness I despise

Memories come slow and painful
A feeling of desolute confusion
I turn to desperation. . .
The one and only illusion

Madness makes us wonder
What we think and who we are
Dirty minds and ugly games
Everyone feels so far

But the blood keeps on running
No way to stop the flow
Cold unyeilding fingers
Their vivid eyes aglow

My pulse pumping stronger
The heat building higher
Moments pass by..
I can bear it no longer

I scream out in pain
For every being to hear
They ignore my pleading cry
I can smell their fear

Venemous thoughts
meek writings on the wall
forevermore in lonliness
my limp body falls

I cant feel the sting of rejection
nor hear the voices of agony
everything is numb
nothing is left for me


pain fades away
no doubts left in my mind
oh yes.. let it come
for its peacefullness I find




Copyright © georgelynyrd920 ... [ 2003-01-07 02:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The Cave (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 02:27:59 AM AEST
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I wanna cave *wipes tears*....this is so beautiful...you know i think i'd rather find somthing like this and find peacefullness in this manner rather than to go through the agony of what this life does to a person.....i'd live in a cave and live happy ever after and know that i had peace in my soul rather than to live in this confused busy judgemental place.....thank you for sharing this one it hit deep with me...you write beautifully my friend...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: The Cave (User Rating: 1 )
by Killer on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 10:17:07 AM AEST
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I have felt this way many times.... Great job


Re: The Cave (User Rating: 1 )
by SmokinJoeEvil on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 10:30:46 AM AEST
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The world can seem purposefully confusing and cold at times. Let us hope that darkness is not the only escape.


Re: The Cave (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 11:58:33 AM AEST
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oh this is beautiful...


Re: The Cave (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 04:18:03 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc, Goerge...... This is a lovely write....with great imagery!!
hope to see many more..
Jenni




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