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Array ( [sid] => 99078 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Guilty Pleasures [time] => 2005-06-23 11:24:12 [hometext] => Written last night after I had my little 'fun'... [bodytext] => drawing unknown pictures
admiring the sadistic art
blood seeping from these lines
stealing life from my heart

laughter escapes my lips
air growing thin
mind beginning to darken
I'm dying within

losing grip
blade is falling
landing isn't heard
only death's calling

fading into sleep
neverending dream
no mind left to comprehend
no voice left to scream

alone ... drifting wordlessly
there's nothing I could say
all my guilty pleasures
took my life away [comments] => 7 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 72 [informant] => ruby_star_angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )

Guilty Pleasures

Contributed by ruby_star_angel on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 11:24:12 AM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

drawing unknown pictures
admiring the sadistic art
blood seeping from these lines
stealing life from my heart

laughter escapes my lips
air growing thin
mind beginning to darken
I'm dying within

losing grip
blade is falling
landing isn't heard
only death's calling

fading into sleep
neverending dream
no mind left to comprehend
no voice left to scream

alone ... drifting wordlessly
there's nothing I could say
all my guilty pleasures
took my life away

Copyright © ruby_star_angel ... [ 2005-06-23 11:24:12]
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Re: Guilty Pleasures (User Rating: 1 )
by Bones on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 11:43:48 AM AEST
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First of all, very good poem. I'm suprised no one has posted a comment up to this point. This poem is very emotional. Very nice. Good describtions. Overall I'd give it a 5 out of 5.

Don't let worldly things take you down. May your talents sing in the wind with the cheery birds of spring time.

-Bones

Re: Guilty Pleasures (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:02:31 PM AEST
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No to sound too much on the depressed side after reading this.But life is out there....you have talent. Use it. Dont be as picky or un real.....too short and time is there.just member nothing is a guarnetee......go for all wheile you have it. Again great write.

Brew!~

Re: Guilty Pleasures (User Rating: 1 )
by starry_eyed_soul on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:49:10 PM AEST
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Amazing, i really like the way you wrote this... but with that said if u really do what the poem implies then i suggest you get help it does make a difference.... but still good poem.
TiffanyShay

Re: Guilty Pleasures (User Rating: 1 )
by EVERxSOxSWEET on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 01:23:21 AM AEST
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wow

beautifully written,

"fading into sleep
neverending dream
no mind left to comprehend
no voice left to scream"

that stood out to me.
Amazing write.

Re: Guilty Pleasures (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 07:03:57 AM AEST
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awesome

Re: Guilty Pleasures (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 07:04:22 AM AEST
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awesome

Re: Guilty Pleasures (User Rating: 1 )
by UnmovedMover on Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 07:25:33 AM AEST
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Good write

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