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Array ( [sid] => 99044 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the cut is deep [time] => 2005-06-23 01:40:04 [hometext] => i no its long but its worth reading [bodytext] => the cut is deep
but not deep enough
it will never be deep enough
never deep enough to die
but i should be happy now
yet i wish to die
i scream in pain
but no one chear
no one can tell im screaming for help
no one cares
no one sees
no one hears
no one who does hear looks
they see but look away
when will anyone wee that
im in a bath ok bloody water
im dieing
im screaming
im crying deep inside
im bleeding inside and out
im going to die one day soon
im not going to be an adult
im not goina makei it in this world
if i do i will be alone
yet no one sees
no one cares
no one bothers
no one loves me
on one holds me
no one conferts me
no one cares at all
so this is the end of it all
so im writing this because
i cant take it any more
because no one cares
no one looks
no one hears
no one even hugs me
no one tells me its all right
no one is there for me late at night
no one for me to wake up next to
if you even took a look
you would see
a girl that has no one
a girl that is alone in a croweded room
a girl that has no one
a girl that has nothing
a girl that is screaming for help
a girl that is crying
a girl that is dying slowly
a girl in a dark shadow
a girl that is always picked last
a girl that wants to be huged
a girl who crys ger sleep
a girl who needs a little love
a girl that is DEAD! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 72 [informant] => Tears_of_my_heart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )
the cut is deep

Contributed by Tears_of_my_heart on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 01:40:04 AM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry



the cut is deep
but not deep enough
it will never be deep enough
never deep enough to die
but i should be happy now
yet i wish to die
i scream in pain
but no one chear
no one can tell im screaming for help
no one cares
no one sees
no one hears
no one who does hear looks
they see but look away
when will anyone wee that
im in a bath ok bloody water
im dieing
im screaming
im crying deep inside
im bleeding inside and out
im going to die one day soon
im not going to be an adult
im not goina makei it in this world
if i do i will be alone
yet no one sees
no one cares
no one bothers
no one loves me
on one holds me
no one conferts me
no one cares at all
so this is the end of it all
so im writing this because
i cant take it any more
because no one cares
no one looks
no one hears
no one even hugs me
no one tells me its all right
no one is there for me late at night
no one for me to wake up next to
if you even took a look
you would see
a girl that has no one
a girl that is alone in a croweded room
a girl that has no one
a girl that has nothing
a girl that is screaming for help
a girl that is crying
a girl that is dying slowly
a girl in a dark shadow
a girl that is always picked last
a girl that wants to be huged
a girl who crys ger sleep
a girl who needs a little love
a girl that is DEAD!




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Re: the cut is deep (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 02:23:10 AM AEST
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GREAT POEM! I feal like that ever day and relate to the cutting part.


Re: the cut is deep (User Rating: 1 )
by blackholesun on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 02:27:33 AM AEST
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i thought no one felt how i did,guess i was wrong you do,you know there are plenty of ppl like me and you who need someone to go to,if u want ,id love to chat sometime ,maybe i can help with sum opf those restless nights


Re: the cut is deep (User Rating: 1 )
by Sad-one on Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 11:26:59 PM AEST
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OH MY "F" ing GOD!!!!
Do you have my mind or something?
This is whats been in my head forever.
We definatley gotta talk sometime E-Mail me PM me anytime.
By the way great poem!

taytay13@flash.net




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