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Array ( [sid] => 99043 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Good-bye [time] => 2005-06-23 01:19:56 [hometext] => i was in a depressed stage of bi-polarness [bodytext] => I'm saying Good-bye
I can't take it any more
Too much pain for me to take
I'm to far gone for you to care

I'm way far gone to love
To live, to breath, to care
To dare to live is like me dying slowly

I lost my will to live
Along time ago
So why do you ever care about me?
Because I'm dying from the inside out
Every day little by little
One day I will be gone
But will anyone dare to care

I'm saying good-bye tonight
I'm daying good--bye today
I'm all thats forgotten
I'm worthless to you

Please don't care
I don't want to hurt you
Because I'm dieing slowly
And painfully

I'm jsut not worth the life
The air, the time, the love, the pain
The hate drove me to this
So i will lift the Blade to my Wrist
And place the clod dteal on my pain and press
Then pull slowly savoiring the pain
For it will be the last thing i ever feel
Suddenly it all fees real

So I'm sorry for all the time
The love , and the pain
All wasted on me
So im saying

GOOD-BYE [comments] => 1 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Tears_of_my_heart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Good-bye

Contributed by Tears_of_my_heart on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 01:19:56 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I'm saying Good-bye
I can't take it any more
Too much pain for me to take
I'm to far gone for you to care

I'm way far gone to love
To live, to breath, to care
To dare to live is like me dying slowly

I lost my will to live
Along time ago
So why do you ever care about me?
Because I'm dying from the inside out
Every day little by little
One day I will be gone
But will anyone dare to care

I'm saying good-bye tonight
I'm daying good--bye today
I'm all thats forgotten
I'm worthless to you

Please don't care
I don't want to hurt you
Because I'm dieing slowly
And painfully

I'm jsut not worth the life
The air, the time, the love, the pain
The hate drove me to this
So i will lift the Blade to my Wrist
And place the clod dteal on my pain and press
Then pull slowly savoiring the pain
For it will be the last thing i ever feel
Suddenly it all fees real

So I'm sorry for all the time
The love , and the pain
All wasted on me
So im saying

GOOD-BYE




Copyright © Tears_of_my_heart ... [ 2005-06-23 01:19:56]
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Re: Good-bye (User Rating: 1 )
by skyblumoon on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 11:03:58 AM AEST
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This is so sad. It was well written and very honest. I hope your feeling better.
Smile.
Blu




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