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Tie Game
Contributed by
Savannah
on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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It was a game
and I tried so hard to win
I studied tactics
and I studied stragey
I moved my pieces
and I rolled the dice
I read the rules
and followed them religiously
I picked the cards
and I played them well
I hid my emotions
and wore my poker face
I passed go
and collected my money
I did the very best I could
and it wasn't enough
I'm without you
and so I lose
But you're without me
and so you lose too
Copyright ©
Savannah
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2003-01-07 00:40:00]
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Re: Tie Game
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by EileenK on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 03:05:31 AM AEST
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| So true. People should stop playing games and say what they really feel... |
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Re: Tie Game
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by SmokinJoeEvil on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 02:27:40 PM AEST
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| If one of the pair is not even playing the game, then I do not see how they could have lost. And if one who is playing finally realizes that the other is not what they ultimately want, then you certainly cannot blame them for calling your hand. |
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Re: Tie Game
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 02:49:11 PM AEST
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| well written |
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Re: Tie Game
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 04:19:55 PM AEST
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aww this poem is exactly how i am feeling at the moment,,, tho im stil in the process, and i DONT WANT to play my game anymore.. i know he feels the same, but were both so shy... ans thats what really bites the big one,,, lol, any suggestions?
Mit Liebe und Umarmungen
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