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Array ( [sid] => 99025 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Befor You Start To Write [time] => 2005-06-22 22:31:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Iv had it up to here with this half ***
Barely thought out peaces of crap
Next time you deside to write
Please keep These things in mind

Dig deep in that soul and just let it roll

For I'm tired of reading about how
Billy boy is running off with Bobby-sue
Thats been done a million times through
And if i have to read one more line about
How you just cant live without some girl
I swear im goin to shout so grow up or go pout

And I sure dont want hear about how
You want still your wrist because you
Just cant seem to deal with life thought *****
So heres my advice go ahead bleed out
Just remember one thing while that
Beautiful crimson flows on out
The way you'v been day dreaming about
There is NO comein back No second chance

Come on someone write me a line about
Love that transcend space and time
Or the pain that you cant even begin
To compare to that damn black rain
Tell me of a heaven that yearns for hell
Write me a line that makes me want to cry
Or take a ride among the starts an drink the milkyway

Come on what you waiting for?

This is in no way meant to offend anyone yet some how im sure i have [comments] => 3 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 6 [informant] => ABySs [notes] => Mod 9 bleep word 6/22/05 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Befor You Start To Write

Contributed by ABySs on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 10:31:41 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Iv had it up to here with this half ***
Barely thought out peaces of crap
Next time you deside to write
Please keep These things in mind

Dig deep in that soul and just let it roll

For I'm tired of reading about how
Billy boy is running off with Bobby-sue
Thats been done a million times through
And if i have to read one more line about
How you just cant live without some girl
I swear im goin to shout so grow up or go pout

And I sure dont want hear about how
You want still your wrist because you
Just cant seem to deal with life thought *****
So heres my advice go ahead bleed out
Just remember one thing while that
Beautiful crimson flows on out
The way you'v been day dreaming about
There is NO comein back No second chance

Come on someone write me a line about
Love that transcend space and time
Or the pain that you cant even begin
To compare to that damn black rain
Tell me of a heaven that yearns for hell
Write me a line that makes me want to cry
Or take a ride among the starts an drink the milkyway

Come on what you waiting for?

This is in no way meant to offend anyone yet some how im sure i have




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Re: Befor You Start To Write (User Rating: 1 )
by LevyMetal on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 10:46:00 PM AEST
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original..pretty good


Re: Befor You Start To Write (User Rating: 1 )
by Unheard_Mute on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:16:57 PM AEST
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*starts a slow clap*


Re: Befor You Start To Write (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 04:22:43 AM AEST
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Well I must give you due,
I'm sure you've offended,
One or two,
if you don't like depressing lines,
and wanna have a laugh,
why not read mine?

lol! all the best from johnny
( who is as modest as ever!)




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