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Array ( [sid] => 99019 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Something Isn't Right [time] => 2005-06-22 21:54:52 [hometext] => This poem is about I guy I like but something just doesn't seem right with him!plz comment [bodytext] => Something isn't right,
I can see it in your eyes,
I can feel it in your kiss.

You say you love me,
And I love you too,
But something doesn't feel right with you,
Something just doesn't fit.

I don't know what it is,
I don't know how this got to be,
I wonder what's up with you,
How do I know if your right?

I can't find you anymore,
It's like my words mean nothing to you,
When your around them you change,
But that's not all, is it?

This puzzel isn't fitting,
I don't understand you,
Because something isn't right! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Karlee14 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Something Isn't Right

Contributed by Karlee14 on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 09:54:52 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Something isn't right,
I can see it in your eyes,
I can feel it in your kiss.

You say you love me,
And I love you too,
But something doesn't feel right with you,
Something just doesn't fit.

I don't know what it is,
I don't know how this got to be,
I wonder what's up with you,
How do I know if your right?

I can't find you anymore,
It's like my words mean nothing to you,
When your around them you change,
But that's not all, is it?

This puzzel isn't fitting,
I don't understand you,
Because something isn't right!

Copyright © Karlee14 ... [ 2005-06-22 21:54:52]
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Re: Something Isn't Right (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 09:58:30 PM AEST
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hey sometimes a girl needs to follow gut instinct. (we are usually right...just dont tell the guys) lol j.k. anyways oyur poem was well written. good job.

Re: Something Isn't Right (User Rating: 1 )
by foxfire44 on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 11:17:56 PM AEST
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if you feel it then go with it usually your right so do not 2nd guess good poem

Re: Something Isn't Right (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 02:42:41 AM AEST
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In my opinion, love can never go wrong, nor
can you ever go wrong with love. If there's
something wrong with what you feel, then it's
not love... maybe something else.

Good poem. Keep writing!

-Butch

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