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"MY ROSE OF LIFE"

The couple appear old outside,
Renewing their aged hearts inside.
Their skin wrinkles, head becomes bare.
And faithful hearts learn o'r years share.

The young heart is so impatient.
Loving qualities not instant.
A scarred heart retains its gladness
Surviving each day of sadness

Joy seems to come more readily.
Our priorities are rearranged steadily.
Materialism takes second place.....
Feelings and people first in the race.

We've made it to the finish line.
Bravery and courage we combine.
Little things mean everything to us.
Suddenly we have become ageless.

Created by
Lovingcritters
consue
June 21, 2005

"The spiritual eyesight improves as
the physical eyesight declines."
~Plato~

*Ageless Smiles*

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MY ROSE OF LIFE

Contributed by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 01:40:15 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

"MY ROSE OF LIFE"

The couple appear old outside,
Renewing their aged hearts inside.
Their skin wrinkles, head becomes bare.
And faithful hearts learn o'r years share.

The young heart is so impatient.
Loving qualities not instant.
A scarred heart retains its gladness
Surviving each day of sadness

Joy seems to come more readily.
Our priorities are rearranged steadily.
Materialism takes second place.....
Feelings and people first in the race.

We've made it to the finish line.
Bravery and courage we combine.
Little things mean everything to us.
Suddenly we have become ageless.

Created by
Lovingcritters
consue
June 21, 2005

"The spiritual eyesight improves as
the physical eyesight declines."
~Plato~

*Ageless Smiles*

Copyright © lovingcritters ... [ 2005-06-22 01:40:15]
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Re: MY ROSE OF LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by ABySs on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 01:46:02 AM AEST
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thats very beautiful
and very well written

Re: MY ROSE OF LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 01:59:13 AM AEST
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Wow ConSue you continue to amaze...! Your ability to tell such an exquisite story in so few words is unbelievable...The words you so carefully crafted in this write are wise indeed, and you carried it off quite nicely. Well done!!
Scorp.

Re: MY ROSE OF LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 03:07:30 AM AEST
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Very beautifull masterpeice.
Awesome.
huggs,
yobrat,
emy

Re: MY ROSE OF LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 04:20:07 AM AEST
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Lovely poem ConSue a true picture of an elederly couple sitting reminiscing perhaps of the joys they have shared in their long lives together. You paint such a delicate picture with your magic pen. Hugs from Martha and Bernard.

Re: MY ROSE OF LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 07:11:42 AM AEST
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Lovely

Shari

Re: MY ROSE OF LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 07:54:23 AM AEST
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So very beautiful. And what a deep insight into the mysteries of life!

Oh yes, our priorities are definitely re-arranged. And small things take on the greatest importance.
I also agree fully with friend PLATO

"The spiritual eyesight improves as
the physical eyesight declines."
~Plato~

Wise felow - cherish him!
I most inspiring poem this ConSue.
Loved this amazing work of art!
Blessing and
Warm love
Elizabeth

Re: MY ROSE OF LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 08:08:54 AM AEST
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Reminds me of how my grandparents were. Now its not complete........nannie is gone. But they were 2 that had that heart.....young and still young. Thats what I want one day. To look back and know, that i am and always was love that way. Beautiful write Consue, as always.

Brew~

Re: MY ROSE OF LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 04:09:24 PM AEST
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such a delicate piece. you allow the reader to feel the emotion. the words and devices combine to bring sincerity through. wonderful. chris.

Re: MY ROSE OF LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 03:47:57 PM AEST
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this is so sweet and so beautiful connie girl:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: MY ROSE OF LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 07:33:48 AM AEST
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Love is ripe for any age, some ages are just more richly felt.
Wonderful write Connie

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