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Array ( [sid] => 98927 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => First day of her life [time] => 2005-06-22 00:50:30 [hometext] => first time i've written anything in months..its..rough. lol [bodytext] => Her life passed by
She never knew the meaning of happiness,
She didnt believe in such a thing.
She drowned in sorrow as she learned new things about the world,
Life, and even herself.
Her sky was always cloudy,
The rain never ceased to pour.

Untill...

One morning,
She awoke with a jump,
She though "Today will be different"
...And it was.
This day was like none other,
This was the first day of her life.

This was the day the boy of her many dreams
Finally took her hand.
This was the day she showed her first real smile,
The day she finally realized,
That she'd be okay.

Ever since her new life began,
Not a tear has fallen,
She sees beautiful, sparkling stars in the night sky.
In his arms she lookes above her, ,
The stars seem to sparkle just for them.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 2 [informant] => EVERxSOxSWEET [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

First day of her life

Contributed by EVERxSOxSWEET on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 12:50:30 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Her life passed by
She never knew the meaning of happiness,
She didnt believe in such a thing.
She drowned in sorrow as she learned new things about the world,
Life, and even herself.
Her sky was always cloudy,
The rain never ceased to pour.

Untill...

One morning,
She awoke with a jump,
She though "Today will be different"
...And it was.
This day was like none other,
This was the first day of her life.

This was the day the boy of her many dreams
Finally took her hand.
This was the day she showed her first real smile,
The day she finally realized,
That she'd be okay.

Ever since her new life began,
Not a tear has fallen,
She sees beautiful, sparkling stars in the night sky.
In his arms she lookes above her, ,
The stars seem to sparkle just for them.

Copyright © EVERxSOxSWEET ... [ 2005-06-22 00:50:30]
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Re: First day of her life (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 01:24:50 AM AEST
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Wow, I can feel the lights blink.
A masterpeice of twinkling stars.
huggs,
emy

Re: First day of her life (User Rating: 1 )
by poemprophet on Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 08:47:15 PM AEST
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words that let everyone know how this man saved you from a life of sadness and despair. its nice when you find a love that changes your whole world.

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