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Array ( [sid] => 98926 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Think [time] => 2005-06-22 00:41:33 [hometext] => This poem can be misunderstood very easily so comment if u think u know what it's about! [bodytext] => You think you're so cool,
You think you're the best,
But I know when you look in the mirror,
All you see is your lie,
And somehow you've got us all fooled.

You're so perfect,
No flaws when you're pretending,
Without the mask,
Where will you hide?
Can't find your self,
Lost in your lie!

Have you no shame,
Do you not notice,
That I know who you are,
And I don't love you anymore!

How do you sleep at night,
You treat everyone so badly,
It's a nightmare to see you,
But I know now,
I know who you are!

You can't fool me,
You can't hide from the truth,
One day it will catch up to you.

You deserve to cry yourself to sleep,
You don't deserve to walk this earth,
You don't even deserve the bed you sleep in!

Just remember when you come to school,
That I see through the lies,
Because I know...
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Karlee14 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

You Think

Contributed by Karlee14 on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 12:41:33 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You think you're so cool,
You think you're the best,
But I know when you look in the mirror,
All you see is your lie,
And somehow you've got us all fooled.

You're so perfect,
No flaws when you're pretending,
Without the mask,
Where will you hide?
Can't find your self,
Lost in your lie!

Have you no shame,
Do you not notice,
That I know who you are,
And I don't love you anymore!

How do you sleep at night,
You treat everyone so badly,
It's a nightmare to see you,
But I know now,
I know who you are!

You can't fool me,
You can't hide from the truth,
One day it will catch up to you.

You deserve to cry yourself to sleep,
You don't deserve to walk this earth,
You don't even deserve the bed you sleep in!

Just remember when you come to school,
That I see through the lies,
Because I know...

Copyright © Karlee14 ... [ 2005-06-22 00:41:33]
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Re: You Think (User Rating: 1 )
by ABySs on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 01:36:54 AM AEST
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if im not misstaken its about one of two things
first id say some popular kid that actin like
theyre something you think theyre not (and most likely arent) or it could just be ventin
about the airs people some time try to take on
that arent theyre own or in other words actin
a set way to "fit in"
now that thats out the way i just want say
very nice poem

Re: You Think (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 02:50:40 AM AEST
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is it about you?

Re: You Think (User Rating: 1 )
by Sad-one on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 10:12:43 AM AEST
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I cant honestly say that I know exactly what this poem is about,but i think
it could be about you and how you wear a mask(not literally) to hide the real you.
It could also be about someone you know who thinks that they are successfully hiding who they really are but you know the person they are on the inside.

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