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Array ( [sid] => 98862 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => still doesn't have a title [time] => 2005-06-21 17:18:43 [hometext] => still working on this one, comments appreciated [bodytext] => Craving to know what it's like to have won.
Fearing defeat from a war just begun.
The taste of my vice still searing my lips.
Ecstasy heightened by fingertips.
Pleasure and sorrow know not what they do--
Bring joy and bring pain, not one always two.
Must I fight and feel jealousy's pain?
Throughout time's existence, lonliness remains
Soaring with wings bonded by wax,
I carve the sky, but never reach max,
for, feather by feather, they come undone.
Upon reaching the ground, I know only to run;
Sprinting back to all I that I know.
The haven of you that should love me so. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 22 [informant] => evilcherry312 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

still doesn't have a title

Contributed by evilcherry312 on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 05:18:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Craving to know what it's like to have won.
Fearing defeat from a war just begun.
The taste of my vice still searing my lips.
Ecstasy heightened by fingertips.
Pleasure and sorrow know not what they do--
Bring joy and bring pain, not one always two.
Must I fight and feel jealousy's pain?
Throughout time's existence, lonliness remains
Soaring with wings bonded by wax,
I carve the sky, but never reach max,
for, feather by feather, they come undone.
Upon reaching the ground, I know only to run;
Sprinting back to all I that I know.
The haven of you that should love me so.

Copyright © evilcherry312 ... [ 2005-06-21 17:18:43]
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Re: still doesn't have a title (User Rating: 1 )
by foxfire44 on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 05:25:23 PM AEST
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craving the haven that is you... (smile).just a thought for a title...good job of what yoou have writen I liked it

Re: still doesn't have a title (User Rating: 1 )
by Brandyx7 on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 05:37:46 PM AEST
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You know... you don't have to title it.. In fact Many poets did not name their poems (Dickinson, the sonnets of Shakespeare, George Herbert, etc.) The only caution that I will give you about not titling them is this: historically poems not titled that become famous (see examples listed above) are indeed titled when put in anthologies or studied. They get assigned numbers, usually old poets, (sonnet 13, sonnet 121) or are titled by the first line of the poem. But, what I do, is I just name them HBJ1 (my intials) and so forth. Because, that way they already have a name and can't be renamed. But you may not feel that way... I was just giving out a suggestion.

Hope I have helped...

Brandyx7

Re: still doesn't have a title (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 06:24:46 PM AEST
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Wow, this was so good. Loved the rhymes!

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