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Array ( [sid] => 98860 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => missin you [time] => 2005-06-21 17:08:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i dont know what im supposed to do
ive ben tryin so hard to forget you
and ive realy been doin good lately
but then everything went bad

i was starting to be happy
then it hit me like a stone
a slap across the face
my happiness erased

now evertime i finnaly start to heal
i see an immage of a hole
the place were my heart used to be
till you ripped it out and stole it from me

as usual i jinxed myself
i new it was just too easy
to find someone who i could love
and just forget about what ive lost

im never gonna forget you
and ill never stop loving you
so tell me what im i supposed to do
if i never stop missing you?

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato [comments] => 4 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 22 [informant] => bethers_is_my_baby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

missin you

Contributed by bethers_is_my_baby on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 05:08:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

i dont know what im supposed to do
ive ben tryin so hard to forget you
and ive realy been doin good lately
but then everything went bad

i was starting to be happy
then it hit me like a stone
a slap across the face
my happiness erased

now evertime i finnaly start to heal
i see an immage of a hole
the place were my heart used to be
till you ripped it out and stole it from me

as usual i jinxed myself
i new it was just too easy
to find someone who i could love
and just forget about what ive lost

im never gonna forget you
and ill never stop loving you
so tell me what im i supposed to do
if i never stop missing you?

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato

Copyright Â© bethers_is_my_baby ... [ 2005-06-21 17:08:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: missin you (User Rating: 1 )
by foxfire44 on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 05:19:13 PM AEST
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a nice poem needs some spelling help but you did good

Re: missin you (User Rating: 1 )
by Brandyx7 on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 05:32:45 PM AEST
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Nice connection... You did a very good job leting the reader know .. you care about this person... But, I personally think it would be a little bit more striking if you made it more mysterious. But, that is just my opinon.... Yes, again nice connection... And I agree with some spelling corrections, it could be better.

Keep Writing,

Brandyx7

Re: missin you (User Rating: 1 )
by JasTrask_22 on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 06:11:16 PM AEST
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very good poem and metaphors. reminds me of someone that i'll never forget and that i love. awesome job!

Keep smilin'

JA.z.z..z...

Re: missin you (User Rating: 1 )
by twisted_dreams on Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 09:07:20 PM AEST
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wow.. Amanda that poem is very good... packed with emotion.. and very well written! keep up the good work!

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