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Array ( [sid] => 98856 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fractured [time] => 2005-06-21 16:52:31 [hometext] => My first piece of writing ever open to public scrutiny. Feel free to be brutally honest. [bodytext] => Beware of the so called innocent
For just like the placid waters that embody calm and serenity
They only reflect the evils of the world while keeping what lies beneath a secret
To all but those who dare to indulge a suicidal fantasy.
Without aggrevation the surface remains pristine as ice
Appearing to be flush with its horizon
Creating one between the heavens and the earth
Yet the slightest gust will begin to reveal true frailty
As the mightiest gales summon the destruction that lies in wait.
Nothing is so pure as to be perceived as a docile.
Not love, beauty, nor faith.
Secular has banished sacred.
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Fractured

Contributed by DomRy on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 04:52:31 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Beware of the so called innocent
For just like the placid waters that embody calm and serenity
They only reflect the evils of the world while keeping what lies beneath a secret
To all but those who dare to indulge a suicidal fantasy.
Without aggrevation the surface remains pristine as ice
Appearing to be flush with its horizon
Creating one between the heavens and the earth
Yet the slightest gust will begin to reveal true frailty
As the mightiest gales summon the destruction that lies in wait.
Nothing is so pure as to be perceived as a docile.
Not love, beauty, nor faith.
Secular has banished sacred.
Beware of the so called innocent

Copyright © DomRy ... [ 2005-06-21 16:52:31]
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Re: Fractured (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 06:20:13 PM AEST
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Hey, that's really good!!! That's your first poem?....Or first poem that has ever been read by others? Well you are good. Looking forward to some more.

Re: Fractured (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 07:10:48 PM AEST
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wow. i sure hope we get to see more of your writing! its dark and mesmerizing. amazing writer. and good warning.

Re: Fractured (User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 11:01:52 PM AEST
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Very interesting poem. I wonder what you are writing about. Life, death, love, hate.... I am intrigued to know and so I want to read more of what you write to feel what it is you are writing about. Imagination works well does it not? I liked it very much.

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