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[aid] => mick
[title] => Complete
[time] => 2005-06-21 16:15:12
[hometext] => Hey yall! I'd like to know what you think this poem is about and what you think of it. Thanx 2 all the ppl who have commented on any of my other poems. U rock!
[bodytext] => A Gemini twin searching for her other half. Half a person – no way to survive. Trying to become one and complete – a struggle within. Winter, Summer, Spring, to Fall A circle complete, I can never be all. I wish my other self didn’t die I wish that this was just a lie. Why is it just me alone? This does not seem the way it should be. No matter how big, there is always a larger fish in the sea A food chain, a circle – they are complete. I’m never gonna be complete. The big picture of the circle of life. I feel left out of the loop, standing on the sidelines in the cosmic atmosphere. The galaxy. The orbits made continually. I will never go around. I stay grounded, broken and incomplete. I can’t find the rest of me I’m only half of what I should be. So here I am, a Gemini twin, searching for her other half. ~Kortnie~ [comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 43 [informant] => justme03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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