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I am keeper of the flame
Flame that burns so deep within
Free's all sorrow, free's all sin

Surrounded by a lake so clear
Listen as I call you near
Come to me, my love , my all
Do you listen to my call?

Flame eternal, burning bright
Radiant vision,mystic light
Hidden in this cavern deep
Key to gates, I safely keep

Ruby stone, the power source
Keeps the flame right on it's course
Press it and the flame burns cold
Walk inside,you'll not grow old

Walk through to the other side
Nothing there you need to hide
Take my hand and walk with me
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The Flame

Contributed by gwenevere on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 03:35:09 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

I am calling out your name
I am keeper of the flame
Flame that burns so deep within
Free's all sorrow, free's all sin

Surrounded by a lake so clear
Listen as I call you near
Come to me, my love , my all
Do you listen to my call?

Flame eternal, burning bright
Radiant vision,mystic light
Hidden in this cavern deep
Key to gates, I safely keep

Ruby stone, the power source
Keeps the flame right on it's course
Press it and the flame burns cold
Walk inside,you'll not grow old

Walk through to the other side
Nothing there you need to hide
Take my hand and walk with me
We will be forever free

Copyright © gwenevere ... [ 2005-06-21 15:35:09]
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Re: The Flame (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 03:49:51 PM AEST
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Aww that's sweet. I loved the last 2 lines.

Re: The Flame (User Rating: 1 )
by Brandyx7 on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 03:54:43 PM AEST
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Extremely well written! It was different, which was a nice change for me. Because, it seems to me like every poem I read is about the same thing over and over. And yours was entirely orginal and creative. Thanks for giving me a new breath of air! Keep writing.

Re: The Flame (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 05:02:32 PM AEST
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Such a lovely poem written 2 perfection . . .

Ben

Re: The Flame (User Rating: 1 )
by JasTrask_22 on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 06:17:44 PM AEST
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very good poem. i liked the last 2 lines

Keep Smilin'! ++

JA.z.z.zz

Re: The Flame (User Rating: 1 )
by JasTrask_22 on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 06:18:22 PM AEST
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very good write...

JAAZzz...z

Re: The Flame (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 10:32:47 PM AEST
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as always Ros..
I love it..draped in that style that has lasted a mellenia-
you do it so very well..

B

Re: The Flame (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 04:43:39 AM AEST
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Well done Gwenevere. The rhyming is nigh on perfect and the subject matter is light and yet serious Top marks for a very good poem from bernard.

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