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Array ( [sid] => 98797 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bled Free [time] => 2005-06-20 23:29:11 [hometext] => Old Poem one that I wrote after my sons mom left me. [bodytext] => My body is begging me to die

Im not going to lie

My veins beg to bleed

Its begging me to be freed

Blood slowly dripping like the rain

My heart doesnt want to feel the pain

They say soon it will go away

My mind just doesnt want to obey

Soon all of me will be free

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Bled Free

Contributed by FireArchDruid on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 11:29:11 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

My body is begging me to die

Im not going to lie

My veins beg to bleed

Its begging me to be freed

Blood slowly dripping like the rain

My heart doesnt want to feel the pain

They say soon it will go away

My mind just doesnt want to obey

Soon all of me will be free

This I do decree

Copyright © FireArchDruid ... [ 2005-06-20 23:29:11]
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Re: Bled Free (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 07:22:44 PM AEST
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This is my favorite I have read all day. I love how you have different parts of your body struggling in some way because it isn't like that just in a fantasy... it really feels like that in real life. Your mind never does want to obey. You want to be better, but at the same time you don't, you can't. It is hard to explain. You veins begging to bleed. That is a great line. It feels like that. It is like they just want to release the blood and release the pain in your heart and replace it with physical pain. That is how it was for me anyways. Great write...
Jodi

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