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We Live In Your Shadows
Contributed by
xXx_lil_pyro_xXx
on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 08:46:15 PM in AEST
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oops
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You don't see us,
You don't hear us,
But we're still her watching you.
You ignore us,
But control us,
Cause we know the things you do.
So you beat us,
And mistreat us,
Cause that's just how the story goes.
No one finds out,
Nothing gets out,
We just live in your shadows.
Copyright ©
xXx_lil_pyro_xXx
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2005-06-20 20:46:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: We Live In Your Shadows
(User Rating: 1 ) by DorianChambers on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 08:53:11 PM AEST (User
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A compelling observation nice though in it's poetic scence . . .
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Re: We Live In Your Shadows
(User Rating: 1 ) by xXcrossedXx on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 12:42:44 AM AEST (User
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Karis, I really liked this it was well thought out and had a great structure... this reminded me so much of a song though... have you ever written any songs? Anyway this was a beautiful write you always put new viewpoints into your writing and it always gets me thinking- which I love... thanks for sharing this wonderful piece.
Your cuz,
.amanda. |
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