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Array ( [sid] => 98728 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Kid [time] => 2005-06-20 13:38:37 [hometext] => Please comment and critisize [bodytext] => He’s the kid sitting down,
He’s the kid with a frown.

He’s the kid that is blue,
He’s the kid who’s a statue.

He’s the kid who is sad,
He’s the kid who is mad.

He’s the kid who is small,
He’s the kid who can’t recall.

He’s the kid others tease,
He’s the kid not at ease.

He’s the kid who isn’t smart,
He’s the kid falling apart.

He’s the kid without a dad,
He’s the kid who isn’t glad.

He’s the kid without a mom,
He’s the kid who isn’t calm.

He’s the kid who is scared,
He’s the kid who was dared.

He’s the kid who’s astray,
He’s the kid who ran away.

He’s the kid in my sight,
He’s the kid full of fright. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Mild_Tempest [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Kid

Contributed by Mild_Tempest on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 01:38:37 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

He’s the kid sitting down,
He’s the kid with a frown.

He’s the kid that is blue,
He’s the kid who’s a statue.

He’s the kid who is sad,
He’s the kid who is mad.

He’s the kid who is small,
He’s the kid who can’t recall.

He’s the kid others tease,
He’s the kid not at ease.

He’s the kid who isn’t smart,
He’s the kid falling apart.

He’s the kid without a dad,
He’s the kid who isn’t glad.

He’s the kid without a mom,
He’s the kid who isn’t calm.

He’s the kid who is scared,
He’s the kid who was dared.

He’s the kid who’s astray,
He’s the kid who ran away.

He’s the kid in my sight,
He’s the kid full of fright.

Copyright Â© Mild_Tempest ... [ 2005-06-20 13:38:37]
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Re: Kid (User Rating: 1 )
by FIX on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 01:50:38 PM AEST
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Mild_Tempest, your the kid. No?
every line begins with 'He's the kid'
I hav'nt seen such repetition before

curious
FIX

Re: Kid (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 04:50:51 PM AEST
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This was a good poem with a great concept.
The two things I would change to make it great is to take out the repitition, I can see why you wanted to use it but it takes away from the meaning behind this poem. Secondly, come up with an ending that ties up the poem and the reason you wrote it.
Nice write,
--amanda--

Re: Kid (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 06:47:00 PM AEST
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"He is a kid who is bold, because the storiy that he's told. And it's okay to be a little scared but please know that someone cares.

I think you did a good job on this. I am vaguely reminded of Dr Suese's "I don't like green eggs and ham" When i read this.

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