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[aid] => mick
[title] => Stupid
[time] => 2005-06-20 12:03:20
[hometext] => Thought this would never happen to me, but it did.This is for everyone who been in love, then was crushed.Please comment afterwards
[bodytext] => My God, how could my love turn back to hate? Why did you allow one girl to destroy me, and force me in a checkmate?
She keeps calling, but my heart knows she doesn’t care, my feelings are torn, but then again life was never truly fair.
I was stupid to open up; I showed her who I was. I wish I would have been drunk or at least buzzed when I showed her who I was.
But I won’t look back, nor will I plea for another chance, one thing I learned was, you can’t fix love, because the problems will just enhance.
I will wake up tomorrow with her on my mind, that’s what love is all about, I’ll fall out though, it’s just going to take some more time.
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Stupid
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THUGGIN4REAL
on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 12:03:20 PM in AEST
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My God, how could my love turn back to hate? Why did you allow one girl to destroy me, and force me in a checkmate?
She keeps calling, but my heart knows she doesn’t care, my feelings are torn, but then again life was never truly fair.
I was stupid to open up; I showed her who I was. I wish I would have been drunk or at least buzzed when I showed her who I was.
But I won’t look back, nor will I plea for another chance, one thing I learned was, you can’t fix love, because the problems will just enhance.
I will wake up tomorrow with her on my mind, that’s what love is all about, I’ll fall out though, it’s just going to take some more time.
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Re: Stupid
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by heartbroken4ever on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 12:36:28 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel and I'm going thro it again |
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Re: Stupid
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 02:38:13 PM AEST
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| Hey I know how you feel, this has happened to me, and it has happened to at least everyone I know, it has happened to every single person in life at least one time, I enjoyed this write. Keep writing. |
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Re: Stupid
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 03:18:49 PM AEST
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Its one of those things that ha[[ens to everyone.
be stronge. |
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Re: Stupid
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by Baby_Grl on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 08:30:03 PM AEST
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This is really good, if I should say I am stupid I think this is what I'm going through, thank you for letting me read. It was great and sorry for wat your going through.
Baby_Grl |
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Re: Stupid
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 10:24:02 PM AEST
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yo thug..
love aint that-
its ALL that!
you'll know when it comes-
cool write tho-
B |
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Re: Stupid
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 07:43:36 PM AEST
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Damn, i told you boy. you got it. But my heart does truly go out to you, I've felt the same way in the past. I still have times when i wake up and ask myself why I did it. It does take some time, but you'll feel better after a while.
Always,
Courtney
-xo11ox- |
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Re: Stupid
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by jmpy84 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 04:55:07 PM AEST
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| well done keep it up |
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