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Array ( [sid] => 98701 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This world has overtake my fears [time] => 2005-06-20 10:24:50 [hometext] => Ive lost it, my mind gone, my soul buried in this grave. I am done. The world has hated me long enough. I get the point now. I can take it no more! [bodytext] => ---------____________-----------------

Out of Control
Out of my Mind
I am losing my mind
Cry Tears of Pain for me

Out of my shell
Breaking this all to hell
Out of my soul
Take me Rape me Make Me, I'm Losing CONTROL!!!

Im drowning in my sleep
Cant swim in my reality
My mind pulled out to sea
Drowing in my Dreams....

Sacrifice all that is me
Escape from the world tonight
Place me on an alter and worship me
Why do I place my faith in a losing fight?

Why cant I walk now?
Burning below the waste
Below the knees
Feet broken, anger bleeds!

I want to go back to square one
I've lost everything in my mind
Losing control out of breath
Cant see with these blind eyes

Eyes closed tight, they are shut
Apathy has me by my throat
This life has gone on long enough
Losing Control, living is to tough!

Its easy to be bitter at this world
When it tears me into pieces, breaks me down
Lower me off this arch lay me out
Bury this soul, live in my bed underground.

Out of my mind
Out of Control
Blind by dry tears
I am alone, this world controls my fears! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 6 [informant] => MajesticPoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
This world has overtake my fears

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 10:24:50 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



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Out of Control
Out of my Mind
I am losing my mind
Cry Tears of Pain for me

Out of my shell
Breaking this all to hell
Out of my soul
Take me Rape me Make Me, I'm Losing CONTROL!!!

Im drowning in my sleep
Cant swim in my reality
My mind pulled out to sea
Drowing in my Dreams....

Sacrifice all that is me
Escape from the world tonight
Place me on an alter and worship me
Why do I place my faith in a losing fight?

Why cant I walk now?
Burning below the waste
Below the knees
Feet broken, anger bleeds!

I want to go back to square one
I've lost everything in my mind
Losing control out of breath
Cant see with these blind eyes

Eyes closed tight, they are shut
Apathy has me by my throat
This life has gone on long enough
Losing Control, living is to tough!

Its easy to be bitter at this world
When it tears me into pieces, breaks me down
Lower me off this arch lay me out
Bury this soul, live in my bed underground.

Out of my mind
Out of Control
Blind by dry tears
I am alone, this world controls my fears!




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Re: This world has overtake my fears (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 08:49:48 PM AEST
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Great write, lots to think about here.. good job..

First of all, who did the character trust, just to get so tired wanting to give up.

How many people really know the full purpose of life.

Many people love the earth so much that they surely will lose it along with eternal life..

Who had control of the character.. and, was it an evil control, or a good control?

I truly like your poem.. I hope a lot read it.. and give their opinionated comments on it too.

Yours truly,

Raquel Leah (poetress)







Re: This world has overtake my fears (User Rating: 1 )
by MajesticPoet on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 09:08:03 PM AEST
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Thank you for your comments. To answer your questions... The charecter tries to take control, but is struggling between the worlds of good and evil, pain and torture. Many people have hurt him, and all of them have become one inside of him. He feels like it is not a fight no more, and it is just time to give it up, because he cant control himself or so it seems.


Re: This world has overtake my fears (User Rating: 1 )
by budge on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 08:43:53 AM AEST
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Quality i speed read most poems on the site.
A genuine honest interpretation of the world as you see it, you really communicated your veiw well. you should congratulate yourself !!




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