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Array ( [sid] => 9870 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => my eyes [time] => 2003-01-06 13:40:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Cold, dark and lonely nights
tears streaming down my face
feeling this sense of being alone
Knowing that im the one out of place

Waking up each morning
seeing things are this way
hurts me more and more
Knowing its now this way

Crying and lonely all the time
With no one to truely call a mate
Seeing people everyday in life
But really only seeing hate

so called friends keep telling me
Everything will soon be alright
but I know there only lying
To keep my depression out of sight

So before you say anything
Or even try to say you care
if thats was really true
Why is no one ever there

So yes sometimes I want to die
To you is this a suprise
Cause if your a real friend
try seeing things though my eyes [comments] => 3 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 43 [informant] => lil_angel_eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

my eyes

Contributed by lil_angel_eyes on Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 01:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Cold, dark and lonely nights
tears streaming down my face
feeling this sense of being alone
Knowing that im the one out of place

Waking up each morning
seeing things are this way
hurts me more and more
Knowing its now this way

Crying and lonely all the time
With no one to truely call a mate
Seeing people everyday in life
But really only seeing hate

so called friends keep telling me
Everything will soon be alright
but I know there only lying
To keep my depression out of sight

So before you say anything
Or even try to say you care
if thats was really true
Why is no one ever there

So yes sometimes I want to die
To you is this a suprise
Cause if your a real friend
try seeing things though my eyes

Copyright © lil_angel_eyes ... [ 2003-01-06 13:40:00]
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Re: my eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 03:06:25 PM AEST
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oh this is so sad...i really feel for you...

Re: my eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by joe-joe on Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 05:13:20 PM AEST
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one time or another most people feel this way, but they will never admit it, the very ones who seem to be confident and so sure, so be depressed then arise wash your face and go on with the rest of your life.... I really felt this poem in my soul... joe-joe

Re: my eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 05:36:52 PM AEST
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this poem touched my heart for I have been there.

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