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Array ( [sid] => 98682 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => sitting here hoping to die [time] => 2005-06-20 02:39:11 [hometext] => this is 4 amy beth candilario [bodytext] => i dont know what you was told
but i feel rippled and old
please forgive me for the lie
im sitting here hoping to die

i dont want to live no more
cause you think im a man whore
i lost you probaly for good
but i was never understood

my tears are only for you
and my love was always true
now i will say good bye
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sitting here hoping to die

Contributed by psycopath on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 02:39:11 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

i dont know what you was told
but i feel rippled and old
please forgive me for the lie
im sitting here hoping to die

i dont want to live no more
cause you think im a man whore
i lost you probaly for good
but i was never understood

my tears are only for you
and my love was always true
now i will say good bye
as im sitting here hoping to die

Copyright © psycopath ... [ 2005-06-20 02:39:11]
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Re: sitting here hoping to die (User Rating: 1 )
by Baby_Grl on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 06:26:49 PM AEST
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Are you sure there not lies? Tell me where I can meet you, we'll talk about everything. Im over here shaking holding a knife, my eyes can say blood shot almost, cause I've been crying since I was told about you from my brother and his friends. You dont know how much I love you Justin, I want to trust you, but you lied to me once before. Tell me where we can meet we'll talk so we can get things straight between us.
Baby_Grl
P.S. Your poem did make me cry. nice write but dont kill yourself and dont hope to die, dont be like me, you'll live longer than me and I'll never have a next boyfriend, no one cant fit your spot. Love always and always love Baby_Grl

Re: sitting here hoping to die (User Rating: 1 )
by Baby_Grl on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 06:28:17 PM AEST
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you spelled my last name wrong! Its spelled Candelario and if we get things straight you'll know exactly wat my last name WILL be.
Baby_Grl

Re: sitting here hoping to die (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 11:36:57 PM AEST
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nice one justin. i feel the same way.

aubrey

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