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Array ( [sid] => 98680 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hell's Sweet Song [time] => 2005-06-20 02:09:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Can you hear the bells,
Those wondrous bells that wellup an ring out for miles,
They're calling you closer.
So you follow them like a lamb to the slaughter.

Soon you hear the voices,
such beautiful voices, familiar voices, angelic voices,
They're calling you home.
Again you follow them all the while losing sight of the light.

Now you hear they're song clearly.

"Come home to us sweet child
all those that are timed an mild
No need to be afraid for here in this place
We fulfill all desires

Come home to us
Make love with us
Sing this song with us

Come back to us
share in the pleasures of the flesh with us
an be like us"

Now you're singin along following the song,
And paying no mind to the lose of the light.

Now to your surprise,
The song becomes cries,
And try as you might you cant see the light

So now theres no turning back,
you're just another faithless child who lost sight of the light,
For the pleasures of the flesh and unfulfilled desires. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 425 [topic] => 11 [informant] => ABySs [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

Hell's Sweet Song

Contributed by ABySs on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 02:09:32 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

Can you hear the bells,
Those wondrous bells that wellup an ring out for miles,
They're calling you closer.
So you follow them like a lamb to the slaughter.

Soon you hear the voices,
such beautiful voices, familiar voices, angelic voices,
They're calling you home.
Again you follow them all the while losing sight of the light.

Now you hear they're song clearly.

"Come home to us sweet child
all those that are timed an mild
No need to be afraid for here in this place
We fulfill all desires

Come home to us
Make love with us
Sing this song with us

Come back to us
share in the pleasures of the flesh with us
an be like us"

Now you're singin along following the song,
And paying no mind to the lose of the light.

Now to your surprise,
The song becomes cries,
And try as you might you cant see the light

So now theres no turning back,
you're just another faithless child who lost sight of the light,
For the pleasures of the flesh and unfulfilled desires.

Copyright © ABySs ... [ 2005-06-20 02:09:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hell's Sweet Song (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 09:53:07 AM AEST
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I am not really good at religious things or into religions but this was really good. I liked it and it flowed good and it fit together.

take care
christina

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