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Array ( [sid] => 98649 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What goes up has got to fall [time] => 2005-06-19 21:08:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I’ve hit the ground
And there’s no one around
They used to tell me
That when I fall fighting
Get right back up and try again
But I’m always using my brain
I then realize
All of their lies
They say that once
You hit the ground
There’s no where to go but
To go up
I think of this saying
And think why bother trying?
If I go up, I’ll just
Fall back in the dust
For what goes up,
Has got to fall
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What goes up has got to fall

Contributed by sprinter27 on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 09:08:32 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I’ve hit the ground
And there’s no one around
They used to tell me
That when I fall fighting
Get right back up and try again
But I’m always using my brain
I then realize
All of their lies
They say that once
You hit the ground
There’s no where to go but
To go up
I think of this saying
And think why bother trying?
If I go up, I’ll just
Fall back in the dust
For what goes up,
Has got to fall

Copyright Â© sprinter27 ... [ 2005-06-19 21:08:32]
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Re: What goes up has got to fall (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 09:17:05 PM AEST
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ooo this one i do like... it makes so much sense... its like this one quote i read... "if at first you dont succeed, try again. if you fail a second time, quit. no use in being silly about it."
yea... i totally agree with this poem
jennie* great job!

Re: What goes up has got to fall (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 09:46:28 PM AEST
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Yes i have heard that cliched saying too many times before...and yes it kindof annoys me.

I can very much relate to your thoughts of giving up and the frustration I sense in this poem. Very thought-provoking indeed.

Keep up the great work.

Hope to you dear poet.

Re: What goes up has got to fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:15:46 PM AEST
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such truth in your words..
Ideally I would agree-
great write

B

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