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[aid] => mick
[title] => SUN CHIPS
[time] => 2005-06-19 19:40:54
[hometext] => I love Sunflowers.....Waltzing, dancing with the wind. They are the FunFlower!
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"SUNCHIPS"
Petals grown on Sun's chip.....
A sequacious strong spaceship.
Ballerinas with green stems,
The wind waltzes golden gems
Sunflowers are fun flowers
Open petals welcomes greeters.
Brownish centers full faces.
Not prejudiced to any races.
A touch of the sun earthward
Speeds of warp windward.
An encouraging wee gold chip
Heart touching tiny starship.
Long legged beauties sophisticated.
Startling sunbonnets daunted.
A parade marching gracefully.
Created joy for man lovingly.
Created by
Lovingcritters
consue
June 18, 2005
Ah, Sunflower, weary of time,
Who countest the steps of the sun;
Seeking after that sweet golden clime,
Where the traveler's journal done;
Where the youth pined away with desire,
And the pale virgin shrouded in snow,
Arise from their graves, and aspire
Where my Sunflower wishes to go!
- William Blake~
The Sunflower
*Sunflower Smiles*
The painting is
by Van Gogh
"Sunflowers"
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SUN CHIPS
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 07:40:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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"SUNCHIPS"
Petals grown on Sun's chip.....
A sequacious strong spaceship.
Ballerinas with green stems,
The wind waltzes golden gems
Sunflowers are fun flowers
Open petals welcomes greeters.
Brownish centers full faces.
Not prejudiced to any races.
A touch of the sun earthward
Speeds of warp windward.
An encouraging wee gold chip
Heart touching tiny starship.
Long legged beauties sophisticated.
Startling sunbonnets daunted.
A parade marching gracefully.
Created joy for man lovingly.
Created by
Lovingcritters
consue
June 18, 2005
Ah, Sunflower, weary of time,
Who countest the steps of the sun;
Seeking after that sweet golden clime,
Where the traveler's journal done;
Where the youth pined away with desire,
And the pale virgin shrouded in snow,
Arise from their graves, and aspire
Where my Sunflower wishes to go!
- William Blake~
The Sunflower
*Sunflower Smiles*
The painting is
by Van Gogh
"Sunflowers"
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
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Re: SUN CHIPS
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 07:54:14 PM AEST
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lovely ...I put a birdfeeder out by my fence once and feed the birds sunflower seeds...I was greeted in the summer w/ a crop of sunflowers...
What a wonderful surprise that was
Hugs
Shari |
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by Dralion on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 08:43:10 PM AEST
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How can anyone be depressed after seeing a sunflower.
A great write. |
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:27:52 PM AEST
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Awww I loved this, it's beautiful!
Very inspiring work, and made me really grin.
(*is going ta head out to the school courtyard now to admire a sunflower :D*)
Heh, lovely ;)
Keep writing!
~kt |
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by venkat on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 05:42:09 AM AEST
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| I wandered in sunflower fields..I remember those days and that poem of Blake also after reding this..thank you Connie.:-)venkat |
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Re: SUN CHIPS
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 06:29:34 AM AEST
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| what a beautiful picture you portray,I liked thia a lot,so I thank you for the good read,,,, |
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Re: SUN CHIPS
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 08:20:20 AM AEST
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What a beautiful write on one of the lovliest flowers that also nourishes. Nourishes the little birds, the sparrows and all those hungry little creatures.
Oh you have an extraordinary gift for extolling the manifold riches, be it flowers or critters to give delight.!
We had them - sunflowers - in my brother's garden. And the family around. Oh memory!
Beautiful ConSue!
Thankls for composing and sharing.
Warm love
Elizabeth |
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Re: SUN CHIPS
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 10:22:11 AM AEST
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Must admit i do like sunflowers and anything else yellow or orange but i don't like bananas and oranges does that make me odd?
great write I have that very same van gogh hanging in my home (well not the same one)
5 stars! *****
Johnny. |
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Re: SUN CHIPS
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by bernard on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 12:44:25 PM AEST
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| A fitting tribute to Vincent van Gogh, All flowers are my favourites but in the late summer I pass nearly every day a field full of sunflowers. beautiful Hugs from Martha and bernard. |
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Re: SUN CHIPS
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 02:44:43 PM AEST
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| awww awsome awsome awsome. |
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 03:38:44 PM AEST
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this is beautiful connie, just what i needed tonight:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 04:22:49 PM AEST
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Thank you Sue for adding a little sun shine in my heart tonight.
A wonderful flower wonderful write
Love Angelxxxx |
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 04:02:46 AM AEST
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Beutifull.
huggs,
yobrat,
emy |
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