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Array ( [sid] => 98609 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => For thos who dont understand [time] => 2005-06-19 15:44:49 [hometext] => Abc 123 [bodytext] => Yellow as the flower be
A reflection on what's inside to th'e
Abc 123 shall we say plain
Or are the words a mix to follow
OK shall we try this to we
Pritty as the bird lost above
Flying high only because
No looking down only be
You wont ever get it till you see
Take a pick make a suggestion
Is your answer only the question
OK lets see the simple
The words only pritty as a little bee
Boring dont you see
Now
Lets talk about the real excuse
The question why we suffer its abuse
Round and round only to be
N0 sense a here
Wake up people thats all you write
Lets talk now about our real fight
Not about all thats lost
We all loose it gives us sight
Lets begin and walk a free
Its our right dont see the word lets live its might
Your all living in a world of prison
Time we all had some admission

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 55 [informant] => mindset [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

For thos who dont understand

Contributed by mindset on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 03:44:49 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Yellow as the flower be
A reflection on what's inside to th'e
Abc 123 shall we say plain
Or are the words a mix to follow
OK shall we try this to we
Pritty as the bird lost above
Flying high only because
No looking down only be
You wont ever get it till you see
Take a pick make a suggestion
Is your answer only the question
OK lets see the simple
The words only pritty as a little bee
Boring dont you see
Now
Lets talk about the real excuse
The question why we suffer its abuse
Round and round only to be
N0 sense a here
Wake up people thats all you write
Lets talk now about our real fight
Not about all thats lost
We all loose it gives us sight
Lets begin and walk a free
Its our right dont see the word lets live its might
Your all living in a world of prison
Time we all had some admission

Copyright © mindset ... [ 2005-06-19 15:44:49]
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Re: For thos who dont understand (User Rating: 1 )
by LevyMetal on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 05:47:52 PM AEST
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ooooooh..i loved this so much!! very orignal, loved your writing style. Offbeat and unexpectly-very pleasant change. Great message.... *thumbs up**

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