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[aid] => mick
[title] => Daddy's Girl
[time] => 2005-06-19 08:44:01
[hometext] => I wrote this for my Dad, and I can't wait to give it to him today!
[bodytext] => Daddy you are my hero
you are the one I can ask that will always know
You're the one I aspire to be
to say the least---you mean the world to me
Wisdom, kindness, forgiving, wit
I love you more than I could ever admit
If you should go before I do
I think I will die too...
Never would I walk down the aisle
if we weren't arm in arm
You've instilled good sense in me, and kept me out of harm
Our bond so fierce no one could ever compete
you're as important to me as my own heartbeat
I'm a Daddy's girl all the way
and I just wanted to say:
HAPPY FATHER'S DAY!!!!
Enjoy your day all you YPDC Daddies! Love, Scorp.
[comments] => 16
[counter] => 772
[topic] => 15
[informant] => hauntedscorp
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[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 45
[ratings] => 9
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => FathersDayPoems
)
Daddy's Girl
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 08:44:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
FathersDayPoems
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Daddy you are my hero
you are the one I can ask that will always know
You're the one I aspire to be
to say the least---you mean the world to me
Wisdom, kindness, forgiving, wit
I love you more than I could ever admit
If you should go before I do
I think I will die too...
Never would I walk down the aisle
if we weren't arm in arm
You've instilled good sense in me, and kept me out of harm
Our bond so fierce no one could ever compete
you're as important to me as my own heartbeat
I'm a Daddy's girl all the way
and I just wanted to say:
HAPPY FATHER'S DAY!!!!
Enjoy your day all you YPDC Daddies! Love, Scorp.
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2005-06-19 08:44:01]
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Re: Daddy's Girl
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by jyssvw22 on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 09:57:29 AM AEST
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pefect
nice job with this scorp
hes gonna love it |
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Re: Daddy's Girl
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:26:30 AM AEST
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| Nice poem, short and sweet :). |
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Re: Daddy's Girl
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 01:45:15 PM AEST
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Bravo Nice write
Whisper |
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Re: Daddy's Girl
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 02:29:23 PM AEST
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a most beautifuly honest tribute to your father..
he should be very proud!!
a very sweet, heartfelt write scorp..
B |
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Re: Daddy's Girl
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 02:56:47 PM AEST
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A sweet and lovely write scorp . . .
Ben |
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Re: Daddy's Girl
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 03:16:15 PM AEST
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Aw Scorpie, this is so sweet and such deep feelings. I was a Daddy's girl to so I know the heartfelt emotions behind this. He is, I am positive, so very proud of you.
Hugs.
Rita
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Re: Daddy's Girl
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 08:42:45 PM AEST
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Scorp,
This is a beautiful and touching write!!!! It is so wonderful you have such a awesome relationship with you Dad , great write!!
Leia |
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Re: Daddy's Girl
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by Willofree on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 11:35:29 AM AEST
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Beautiful tribute to your dad on Father's Day. I think any dad would be extremely touched to receive such a heartfelt outpouring of love.
Being a father, I can certainly relate to how special a message this is.
As one of those YPDC dads, thanks for sharing, Scorp
Will |
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Re: Daddy's Girl
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by Dorkfish on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 12:50:31 PM AEST
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| That was awesome. My dad and I have been through a lot, but we now have the most wonderful relationship. I feel fo rhim much like the way you speak about your father. Good piece. I loved it! |
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Re: Daddy's Girl
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 04:26:10 PM AEST
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I am sure he loved it.
I love my daddy with all my heart also
Superb
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: Daddy's Girl
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 02:55:20 AM AEST
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Beautiful tribute, scorp :)
Not much of a daddy's girl myself,
but this warmed my heart. Very nice write. =) |
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Re: Daddy's Girl
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by SocialMisfit on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 03:33:30 AM AEST
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scorp, i dont think im quallifyed to post a comment on your poems lol your just that good. and i bet your dad loved this alot, he is a lucky man to have such a talented daughter to love him so much. awsome poem.
SM |
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Re: Daddy's Girl
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 10:10:50 AM AEST
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| That is really a great write. He certainly must be a proud dad of an awesomely wonderfu talented daughter. l |
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Re: Daddy's Girl
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:27:56 PM AEST
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| i liked the tone most in this, seemed like it was written from a little girl (sorry if you didnt even intend to have that tone, lol) some of this was forced though, which isnt to your standards, scorp! fathers day indeed. |
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Re: Daddy's Girl
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 03:54:42 PM AEST
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How sweet! I couldn't have expressed it better! Nice write!
-Drapes |
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Re: Daddy's Girl
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 26th October 2020 @ 10:43:03 PM AEST
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So sweet....You could anybody/'/s little girl.
Very touching little Scorp....
Awesome. |
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