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21 and invincible...I think not...

Contributed by LIving_In_My_Dream on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 01:50:26 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Did you know that sometimes I feel invincible? Sometimes I wish that I could take back those nights I spent lying in your arms, and the days I would kiss you. It's hard feeling something new for the first time...like you haven't before. I dont know maybe Im just in awe of the magnitude love can bring, but I know it's there. I know that even when I see the passion that's held within your eyes and you do NOTHING about, I know that its there. I know I cant miss it. Did you know that sometimes the feeling you get when you lie awake is something that you cant hold back. When you are clenching your pillow tight wishing someone was there instead of it, you stop to think that maybe...just maybe you shouldnt have let me go...

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Re: 21 and invincible...I think not... (User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on Wednesday, 1st February 2006 @ 10:08:32 PM AEST
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This is so true. I have had this feeling for someone and I am glad to see someone got a chance to write it down on paper. Thank you for sharing this. It was not much of a poem, but I enjoyed it the same.

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