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Array ( [sid] => 98556 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost in the land of disenchanted [time] => 2005-06-19 00:00:18 [hometext] => I just wrote this tonight so go ahead and tell like it is......(smile) [bodytext] =>

In the far off land of lost disenchanted
Lived a very lonely girl named Lizanted

She was the most common girl you could ever see
Why she looked just like you and me

For some odd reason no one knows
She was put in this lost land where no one goes

Her friends were all of the animals around
They just adored her and kept her from feeling down

Late at night with the moon so high the sky
Lizanted would look out and wonder why

Never could she come up with a reason
Why she was put in this far off prison

Many times she would wish on the biggest star
Hopping her word would be heard from a far

With a heavy heart and deep felt sigh
Lizanted would try so heard not to cry

Some day soon her prince would arrive
Take her way to the place she was deprived

Until the day this happens, comes to be
Lizanted will stay in the lost land of disenchanted never to be seen
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Lost in the land of disenchanted

Contributed by foxfire44 on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 12:00:18 AM in AEST
Topic: ChildrensPoetry





In the far off land of lost disenchanted
Lived a very lonely girl named Lizanted

She was the most common girl you could ever see
Why she looked just like you and me

For some odd reason no one knows
She was put in this lost land where no one goes

Her friends were all of the animals around
They just adored her and kept her from feeling down

Late at night with the moon so high the sky
Lizanted would look out and wonder why

Never could she come up with a reason
Why she was put in this far off prison

Many times she would wish on the biggest star
Hopping her word would be heard from a far

With a heavy heart and deep felt sigh
Lizanted would try so heard not to cry

Some day soon her prince would arrive
Take her way to the place she was deprived

Until the day this happens, comes to be
Lizanted will stay in the lost land of disenchanted never to be seen




Copyright © foxfire44 ... [ 2005-06-19 00:00:18]
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Re: Lost in the land of disenchanted (User Rating: 1 )
by JustAGirl001 on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:19:01 PM AEST
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Great poem. It's the foundation of reality for all those princess-meets-prince charming-reality




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