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[sid] => 98537
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[aid] => mick
[title] => A Loner
[time] => 2005-06-18 21:31:54
[hometext] => This my first poem on YPDC, please comment
[bodytext] => I am an outcast
I stand alone
But despite my differences
I am still flesh and bone
I am misunderstood and treated with hate
And all I wish is for the pain to abate
Society casts me down
And place on me a thorned crown
I am different, I have nothing to hide
The hate of mankind blind them
From my brighter side
Do not hurt me, it is difficult to bare
All I wish
Is for someone to care
[comments] => 9
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[informant] => wandering-soul
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[score] => 15
[ratings] => 3
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => SadPoetry
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A Loner
Contributed by
wandering-soul
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Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:31:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I am an outcast
I stand alone
But despite my differences
I am still flesh and bone
I am misunderstood and treated with hate
And all I wish is for the pain to abate
Society casts me down
And place on me a thorned crown
I am different, I have nothing to hide
The hate of mankind blind them
From my brighter side
Do not hurt me, it is difficult to bare
All I wish
Is for someone to care
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Re: A Loner
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:37:34 PM AEST
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awesome poem!! and i totally feel the same and so do a lot of people, so in reality you aren't standing alone. and i do think you meant YPDC*. back to the poem, though... most people feel like that and want someone who cares.... and i am someone that cares (for others, not myself. lol). i hope it all works out and that you do find someone who cares about you!!! keep up the good work!
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Re: A Loner
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by Wandering-Soul on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:38:35 PM AEST
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| Wait-that's "YPDC". Well, at least everyone knows that when I said "first time," I wasn't kidding. Mental note: Never ask a tired parent for help (ha ha). |
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Re: A Loner
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:39:29 PM AEST
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I like this. Keep crying out; someone will respond eventually...Nice job with the write!
Welcome to YPDC.
Scorp. |
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Re: A Loner
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:48:44 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.....
This is a very heartfelt poem... Good going... I think we have all felt this way at some poing in our lives...
Jenni |
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Re: A Loner
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by visualizing_life on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 10:06:13 PM AEST
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| OMG!!! i LOVE it!! i absolutely love it!! its awesome...i can relate soo much...at some point time we all feel misunderstood....especially me...always be you dont let others bring you down just bc ur different...if you need somebody to care or listen write me i understand...later vl |
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Re: A Loner
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 10:09:11 PM AEST
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A fine piece of work is this. You use rhyme well, with no damage to the natural expression of the verses (too often the words are contorted in the effort to produce a rhyme). Well done.
And welcome! Do enjoy yourself, hear?
Andrew |
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Re: A Loner
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by Jaycee on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 10:29:56 PM AEST
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| A well written first entry, I must say. It is unfortunate that there are so many sad poems on this site. My advice that I would give to anyone (like my kids, for example) is to be yourself, be proud of who you are and embrace your differences. None of us are going to be well liked by everybody. Be strong and reach out to those who care. Even those that feel alone (I have been there) have someone in their lives. The more alone we feel, the more we need to connect with those that care. I am sorry for your pain and hope that others can accept you... |
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Re: A Loner
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by blue_angel on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 11:44:45 PM AEST
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OMG i absolutely LOVE THIS! i can totally relate. everyone longs for someone to care. its like... the best thing ever. i hope that you can find this happiness. if u ever need to talk im here PM me netime. i care
luv n hugs,
jennie* xXx |
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Re: A Loner
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by brew on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 09:13:23 AM AEST
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Liked this write.........feelings well expressed. But always remember........we are all human, and we cant be liked or like all. Be yourself, and be happy. If that happens, it makes all the differ. Someone holds a key to you and heart........so keep smiling.
Brew~ |
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