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I Am
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:06:30 PM in AEST
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I am the voicless stranger
the man of an age apart
a self of days gone by
footsteps in the dark
I have weathered storms
fought my battles surviving
clawing my way out.. I am alive
I am the love that was
the tortured heart.. a moment lost
I am a gentle smile left unseen
I am benevolent and kind
subtlety in motion
the bringer of words
the creator
a vaccant reflection
I am sanity
insane dangling from a string
I am a hurricane wrapped in an eye
an inhaled breath
deadly poison.. the softest touch
a kiss upon a soul
an angel with one wing
a whisper in the wind..
I am unwavering..
ForI am.
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Re: I Am
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:17:45 PM AEST
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good write... i liked it. I like all that you have been! : ). this was a great write. i liked how you wrapped it all up, too. keep up the good work!!
~sprints |
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Re: I Am
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by ejs on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:19:16 PM AEST
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| That's an amazing poem. I really felt connected to it when I read it. Awesome job. |
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Re: I Am
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:32:45 PM AEST
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Great job!! I love the urgency of it, and the total contradiction in the words. Well, well done.
Scorp. |
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Re: I Am
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:38:23 PM AEST
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You are Billy, the writer, the dream, the critic, the human who has been through life enough to know, you are.
smiles,
Rita |
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Re: I Am
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by emystar on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 11:19:03 PM AEST
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Fatabules.
I'm running out of words here.
All of your writing is remarkable to me.
U jus reach out and grab one by the soul.
huggs, big smiles,
emy
A masterpeice. |
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Re: I Am
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by wizard on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 12:46:21 AM AEST
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you are THE poet of poets. you are the freind of freinds.
great write bro,
YOOOUUU AAAHHHHHHH!!!
; -)
wiz
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Re: I Am
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by gwenevere on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 01:45:22 PM AEST
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| I hear you now, knocking at the door |
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Re: I Am
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 03:14:45 PM AEST
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What u r is a poet's poet right up there with longfellow and carl sanders and the rest, a
very inspiring write . . .
Ben |
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Re: I Am
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:31:47 PM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL words.
Very powerful and I was simply mesmerized by you. |
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Re: I Am
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 07:54:25 PM AEST
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oh....Billy, Billy, BILLY!!
The title drew me in and I have been back to read this
several times .... such an inspired write, dear Billy. How
I love to meander through your pages and find little
traces of you left behind .... almost comforting, in
a way.
"a kiss upon a soul"
you are indeed...
eternally~
~Breezy
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