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I've just begun to realize, my lungs will never inhale again.
In such a deeper kind of slumber,
All the negatives are as dead as my sin.
Instead of letting my rabid soul crumble,
I allow my evil side entrance within

Death will not be my end, for it is just the beginning.
The the light has faded beyond my eyes,
And the infernal flame of the wicked is winning.
A heinous act by the malignant demon inside,
As the hope of brighter days are intensely thinning.

The shadows have taken over, and the unholy blood have taken command.
My sinister spirit swallowed my existence,
And fragmented stains left my mind bland.
Dark clouds cover heven in the distance,
And I regret becoming just another idle hand.
. . .
Heven is a place of beauty, and Hell was my home.
Now I reside in nothing but darkness,
Just me and death, all Alone.

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A Deeper Kind Of Slumber

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 08:32:47 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A Deeper Kind Of Slumber

I've just begun to realize, my lungs will never inhale again.
In such a deeper kind of slumber,
All the negatives are as dead as my sin.
Instead of letting my rabid soul crumble,
I allow my evil side entrance within

Death will not be my end, for it is just the beginning.
The the light has faded beyond my eyes,
And the infernal flame of the wicked is winning.
A heinous act by the malignant demon inside,
As the hope of brighter days are intensely thinning.

The shadows have taken over, and the unholy blood have taken command.
My sinister spirit swallowed my existence,
And fragmented stains left my mind bland.
Dark clouds cover heven in the distance,
And I regret becoming just another idle hand.
. . .
Heven is a place of beauty, and Hell was my home.
Now I reside in nothing but darkness,
Just me and death, all Alone.

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-06-18 20:32:47]
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Re: A Deeper Kind Of Slumber (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 09:07:13 PM AEST
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well i better be death, because i certainly wouldnt leave you alone. your ending is phenomenal. your piece is also. ::still cant get over the all alone bit.::

Re: A Deeper Kind Of Slumber (User Rating: 1 )
by PoisonousPyscho on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 11:57:28 PM AEST
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OMG I LOVE IT SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!! AND I LOVE YOU !!! WHOEVER YOU ARE I LOVE YOU !!! PRIVATE MESSAGE ME! ID LOVE TO TALK TO YOU MORE!!!

Re: A Deeper Kind Of Slumber (User Rating: 1 )
by Zeldianus on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:10:33 AM AEST
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Clark, this is one of your best and one of my favorites! Darkly beautiful!

Re: A Deeper Kind Of Slumber (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 10:37:02 PM AEST
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Heart wreching clark.

But you never disappoint me, you are magnificent. The ending was very sad...kinda how Im feeling right now.

I loved every word in all honesty....*claps*

I send my love dear poet.

Re: A Deeper Kind Of Slumber (User Rating: 1 )
by heartbroken4ever on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 11:59:56 AM AEST
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I'm with jen on this one you know i would never leave you alone babe. I love you.

Ur Angel
Amber

Re: A Deeper Kind Of Slumber (User Rating: 1 )
by boobiepeach on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 01:37:23 PM AEST
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its a horrible feeling to be alone.
passionate words.

nat

Re: A Deeper Kind Of Slumber (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 03:34:37 PM AEST
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Very strong words. A great poem.

Re: A Deeper Kind Of Slumber (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 03:33:34 AM AEST
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hmmm very intyeresting write.
i like it alot.

Re: A Deeper Kind Of Slumber (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 07:52:24 AM AEST
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I've never liked dark poetry so much, but you, you are an amazing writer with so much talent. So much beauty comes with each word and I will sit through any amount of poetry, no matter if I like the subject or not, and read every line over and over just because you are that great.
The ending was phenominal by the way :)

Keep up the good work Clark,
Amanda

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