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SQUIRT
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 05:47:26 PM in AEST
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Hello Miss Sensitivity
Nice to know you are still staring at me
Nice to know that the words you chose
That the deliberate tone that rose
And the statement posed
Was a deliberate and malicious attack on my character
Was a blood stain on my cloths
Next time, put it down in a letter
Next time I die
No one is ever gonna’ know
In the interim
As I rot away
In the meantime
As the pigs are held at bay
The invasion ordered underway
Deep Trenches to dig
There will be hell to pay
As the bullets fly
Across the periphery
And the horizon is contorted
As my vision opens
A gaping anomaly
Where the dungeon pit
And the confinement
Appropriately fits
An antisocial reject
The question
Was of course rhetorical
My opinion invalid
Is clearly hypothetical
Incoherently I stumble in
Arrogantly I demand that we begin
Potentially I become amused
As the whirlwind spins
An intense suction
Pulls my skin
A potent reduction
In energetic assortment
In the mass consumption
Of poetic expression
Of vices and addiction
In the soul of the kitchen
Where the preparation for the feast
Begins with the least
Complex of ingredients
Success requires
Discipline and obedience
__________
_____
Copyright ©
jyssvw22
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2005-06-18 17:47:26]
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Re: SQUIRT
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 06:10:20 PM AEST
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Nice poem jyss...Great flow and expression. At least she's good for one thing...She inspires great writes ; )
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Re: SQUIRT
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by Tears_of_my_heart on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 06:50:00 PM AEST
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great poem or song ..............................
abbey
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Re: SQUIRT
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 08:47:59 PM AEST
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I agree with scorp..
the inspiration's a plus..
very well written..
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