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Array ( [sid] => 98436 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The door that is open. [time] => 2005-06-17 23:51:26 [hometext] => I wrote this poem for my Brother in law who came to stay with us,(DROVE ME NUTS) but didn't have the heart to be mean so I changed some words and this is what I got.. [bodytext] => The time has come for me to say,
I've opened my door in every way.
People come in to eat and sleep,
Nothing is asked not one peep.
They do not help in any way,
Not food or lights do they pay.
The day will come and you will see,
Great rewards they will be.
Feelings like this need to be shown,
Make them feel like their not alone.
Listening to all of their tifts,
Understanding is just one of the gifts.
Being their friend and making them feel
This will get better and it's for real.
I open my door in every way,
Hoping to reach out wanting to say,
Life does get better with everyday,
With a friend to help and guide the way. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 19 [informant] => Sherah [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
The door that is open.

Contributed by Sherah on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:51:26 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



The time has come for me to say,
I've opened my door in every way.
People come in to eat and sleep,
Nothing is asked not one peep.
They do not help in any way,
Not food or lights do they pay.
The day will come and you will see,
Great rewards they will be.
Feelings like this need to be shown,
Make them feel like their not alone.
Listening to all of their tifts,
Understanding is just one of the gifts.
Being their friend and making them feel
This will get better and it's for real.
I open my door in every way,
Hoping to reach out wanting to say,
Life does get better with everyday,
With a friend to help and guide the way.



Copyright © Sherah ... [ 2005-06-17 23:51:26]
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Re: The door that is open. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:54:31 PM AEST
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Hey...I can identify with this....my house is like Grand Central Station!!!
Well done
Jenni


Re: The door that is open. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 12:01:35 AM AEST
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Aahh yes,
God's luv in pure form.
I can relate.
this reminds of a scripture some where that say, "If u do itunto one of these u do it unto me. It was Jesus speaking.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
Maybe a bible scholer will come along and know what scripture I'm referring to and if not u still get the picture I'm sure.


Re: The door that is open. (User Rating: 1 )
by foxfire44 on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 12:10:40 AM AEST
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great work it shows you put your heart into it love the poem alot keep up the good work


Re: The door that is open. (User Rating: 1 )
by Shnyzz on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 01:08:47 AM AEST
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I love the way this poem flows. Tres smooth. I also feel for you I always try to help my friends in any way I can.


Re: The door that is open. (User Rating: 1 )
by Rikki on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 01:46:26 AM AEST
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I'm sure it was better to write this than say what was bothering you.
Feelings don't get hurt.
Nice job, Rikki


Re: The door that is open. (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 12:32:54 PM AEST
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A well done write and it was much enjoyed to read. Take care and if I have time to read more of your work I will. Things are just so crazy here in Iraq I don’t get to much time to get online. Take care….Steve




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