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Array ( [sid] => 98433 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => IF U WANT..................................... [time] => 2005-06-17 23:42:08 [hometext] => 4 my hippy. Jim this is dedicated to u 6/17/05 He taught me so much 'bout God, our heritiege, archeology, many things but the spiritual leasons he taught by example. [bodytext] =>

"I am the door: by me

if any man enter in,

he shall be saved,

and shall go in and out,

and find pasture."

              John 10:9

SultryRose's Signatures

When U wake fellin so blue
Yo listen up here's what U do.
Paint a smile on yo heart
Now that's a great big start.

If U want a better life ensue
change, change yo attitude.
If U want a better way
change it, hey, hey, hey........

Laugh back in evil's face
'cause Jesus done seattled his fate.
Reach deep down inside yo heart
Block negatives when they start.

Get angry pilgrims but sin not.
God's already conquerd for U-n-Me.
Tho up yo hands, scream, scream
Get down evil so funky mean!

Humble yo own inner thoughts
"cause in Jesus, U bought.
Have no fear dear aching heart
Our enemy was defeated 'fore our start.

We all been fooled by hate
so open up heaven's gate.
Look at evil break-n-cry
As Jesus luv stands strongly by.
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IF U WANT.....................................

Contributed by emystar on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:42:08 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

"I am the door: by me

if any man enter in,

he shall be saved,

and shall go in and out,

and find pasture."

John 10:9

SultryRose's Signatures

When U wake fellin so blue
Yo listen up here's what U do.
Paint a smile on yo heart
Now that's a great big start.

If U want a better life ensue
change, change yo attitude.
If U want a better way
change it, hey, hey, hey........

Laugh back in evil's face
'cause Jesus done seattled his fate.
Reach deep down inside yo heart
Block negatives when they start.

Get angry pilgrims but sin not.
God's already conquerd for U-n-Me.
Tho up yo hands, scream, scream
Get down evil so funky mean!

Humble yo own inner thoughts
"cause in Jesus, U bought.
Have no fear dear aching heart
Our enemy was defeated 'fore our start.

We all been fooled by hate
so open up heaven's gate.
Look at evil break-n-cry
As Jesus luv stands strongly by.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2005-06-17 23:42:08]
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Re: IF U WANT..................................... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:51:07 PM AEST
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Words of wisdom, my friend...
Thank you for sharing this...
Hugs and appreciation...always
Jenni

Re: IF U WANT..................................... (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 12:01:56 AM AEST
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Beautifuly written, every word, and the perfect music as well.

Re: IF U WANT..................................... (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 06:52:02 AM AEST
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Jesus is the way, Amen! A wonderful poem reinforcing the love and power of Jesus; and the awareness of His presence within our hearts. I was moved by this poem.

A very spiritually touching write, emy

Wonderful

Will

Re: IF U WANT..................................... (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 06:56:11 AM AEST
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Wow this is great full of good advice. I love paint a smile on your heart. You have a wonderful style Emy. Keep writing from bernard.

Re: IF U WANT..................................... (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 08:23:04 AM AEST
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All the wisdom of the world is contained in this delightful and beautiful poem.
Friend taught you great lessons.
"Laugh! laugh! laugh! at evil. Long overcome by the lasting strength and love of Jesus.

Tears have their place,- but so has laughter.
Weep with the mourning, laugh and rejoyce with those that celebrate. (Corinthians 1`?)
Great and inspiring poem star of stars- Emystar.!
Be blessed
Lov a nd hugs
Elizabeth Dandy

Re: IF U WANT..................................... (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 06:25:44 PM AEST
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Fantastic Emmy. May god be with you and urs always.

Love Angelxxxxx

Re: IF U WANT..................................... (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 07:38:18 PM AEST
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a very poignant tribute to an amazing friend..
Im sure he loved it!

Great write with wisdom we all should live by..

B

Re: IF U WANT..................................... (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 02:07:59 AM AEST
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I have to say I like this. I think writing poems that are telling people to be happy are the hardest thing... so this, to me, is great talent.
Jodi

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