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does it make any sound
Could it be one of Gods angels
on a mission that came down

Here to reach out and touch
someone that has needs
Or just here to help them
plant another one of Gods seeds

Maybe here to pick a person up
that just breathed his last
Taking them up to heaven
on that shooting star that goes past

So many stars up in the heavens
just waiting for a new call
Are they Gods angels up there
watching over us in case we fall

When you see a star fall from heaven
take notice and say a little prayer
That star may be on a mission
a little prayer will show how much you care
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Falling Stars

Contributed by OnAngelswings on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 09:59:55 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

When a stars fall from the heavens
does it make any sound
Could it be one of Gods angels
on a mission that came down

Here to reach out and touch
someone that has needs
Or just here to help them
plant another one of Gods seeds

Maybe here to pick a person up
that just breathed his last
Taking them up to heaven
on that shooting star that goes past

So many stars up in the heavens
just waiting for a new call
Are they Gods angels up there
watching over us in case we fall

When you see a star fall from heaven
take notice and say a little prayer
That star may be on a mission
a little prayer will show how much you care

Copyright © OnAngelswings ... [ 2005-06-17 21:59:55]
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Re: Falling Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_eyes70 on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:10:24 PM AEST
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that poem was absoulutly AMAZING! i loved it. great write

angel_eyes70 :)

Re: Falling Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:12:31 PM AEST
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An angelic masterpeice.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Falling Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by foxfire44 on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:13:52 PM AEST
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great poem...I realy like it alot it was very touching........

Re: Falling Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 10:57:47 PM AEST
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Very sweet and inspiring.

Ur poems are very magical. XXX
God bless

Re: Falling Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by saved_by_the_x on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 03:51:02 PM AEST
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love it you have such a talent it is AmAzInG i love it keep it up you are a true blessing and you may change peoples mind on angels and god thanks alot all the love and best wishes =o)

Re: Falling Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 06:13:42 PM AEST
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Another inspiring poem. Great write...........M

Re: Falling Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 09:36:42 AM AEST
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This poem has nice imagery, i'm not sure about the pacing though it didn't read read fluently. Still, well done!

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