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Array ( [sid] => 98412 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The only chance [time] => 2005-06-17 21:34:30 [hometext] => tell me what yew think... [bodytext] => why did yew do this to me?
Why did yew leave me here crying?
Why couldnt yew just keep me happy?
Why did yew have to tell me our bond was dying?

When yew told me how yew felt i cried,
i was thinking maybe this is some sort of joke,
but yew never denied it.

What did i do to yew that made yew do this to me,
i thought that maybe we had a chance
thought maybe we would always be

whats up with this sudden change in everything
when did i screw up,
where did i go wrong

im sitting here thinking and crying,
will i be able to go on without yew?
I feel like yew pryed mi heart open,
it will never be repaired.

yew v'e told me all these lies on how much yew love me,
and i actually believed them,
how could i believe yew,
how did yew get me to believe what i already do.

your hurting me so much yew just dont understand,
i thought we had a chance,
but the chance we had was to end. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 2 [informant] => poetrygirl1991 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

The only chance

Contributed by poetrygirl1991 on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 09:34:30 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

why did yew do this to me?
Why did yew leave me here crying?
Why couldnt yew just keep me happy?
Why did yew have to tell me our bond was dying?

When yew told me how yew felt i cried,
i was thinking maybe this is some sort of joke,
but yew never denied it.

What did i do to yew that made yew do this to me,
i thought that maybe we had a chance
thought maybe we would always be

whats up with this sudden change in everything
when did i screw up,
where did i go wrong

im sitting here thinking and crying,
will i be able to go on without yew?
I feel like yew pryed mi heart open,
it will never be repaired.

yew v'e told me all these lies on how much yew love me,
and i actually believed them,
how could i believe yew,
how did yew get me to believe what i already do.

your hurting me so much yew just dont understand,
i thought we had a chance,
but the chance we had was to end.

Copyright © poetrygirl1991 ... [ 2005-06-17 21:34:30]
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Re: The only chance (User Rating: 1 )
by foxfire44 on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 12:35:46 AM AEST
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you ever thought of writing short stories ....your work looks like you would be good at it not bad workkeep it up

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