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But I know it’s a sad time
But you don’t act sad
Not even mad
You try to lie to me
But I’m friend; not enemy
Don’t even try
To tell me lies
I can see through them
You know I’m not dead
You try to act tough
But I know this is rough
You even smiled at me
When I kept questioning
You; not trusting that
You aren’t too sad
So you lie to me
You’re pretending
That you are fine
But I know you are lying
Just pretending it all
You know you can call
Me and talk with me
Like I said, I’m not enemy,
I’m friend…
Until the end
Yet, I’m the one
That you’ve chosen
To lie to and try to hide
Your feelings, but I’m at your side
Just waiting for you to talk
Offering that dumb walk
That you always offered me
When it was you waiting
For me to talk to you
But we knew
I’d never talk about what I’m hiding
I don’t know if it’s me you’re punishing
With your ****
Lying happiness
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Lying Happiness

Contributed by sprinter27 on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 09:07:57 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You tell me you are fine
But I know it’s a sad time
But you don’t act sad
Not even mad
You try to lie to me
But I’m friend; not enemy
Don’t even try
To tell me lies
I can see through them
You know I’m not dead
You try to act tough
But I know this is rough
You even smiled at me
When I kept questioning
You; not trusting that
You aren’t too sad
So you lie to me
You’re pretending
That you are fine
But I know you are lying
Just pretending it all
You know you can call
Me and talk with me
Like I said, I’m not enemy,
I’m friend…
Until the end
Yet, I’m the one
That you’ve chosen
To lie to and try to hide
Your feelings, but I’m at your side
Just waiting for you to talk
Offering that dumb walk
That you always offered me
When it was you waiting
For me to talk to you
But we knew
I’d never talk about what I’m hiding
I don’t know if it’s me you’re punishing
With your ****
Lying happiness

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Re: Lying Happiness (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 06:14:00 AM AEST
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woo,
very powerfull write.
huggs,
emy

Re: Lying Happiness (User Rating: 1 )
by ItsFELDER on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 11:05:56 AM AEST
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I like this poem. I really can relate to it, hits close to home, although from the opposite angle. Keep your head up, I hope things get better for you.
Felder

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