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Array ( [sid] => 98403 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hollow and Insecure [time] => 2005-06-17 20:37:38 [hometext] => I am angry at the world. It is sickened by a diease we cant even see. I am hollow inside my insecurity. This is angry poetry. Yet a bit emotional. Plz comment. I think this is one of my better ones.Screw The World and its Misconceptions of me! [bodytext] => --------________-----------------

violence in your soul.
common sense you don't know.
tired of being played.
little boy you're just afraid.

I'm not your enemy.
i know you disagree.
you want to beat me down.
see me on the ground.

close your eyes, see only hate.
anger is a lonely state.
pick on me because I'm weird.
something that you feared.

all this sickness hard to swallow.
eats my insides until I'm hollow.
indecision, fornication, condemnation, to damnation.
this world is a breeding ground.
take a look at the bleeding ground.

adoration, temptation, contemplation, to frustration.
you'll fall apart.
don't drag me down.
you rule this world with a synthetic crown.

kill each other for no reason to go against it,
this is treason.
action, reaction, action, reaction.
all this sickness forced to swallow.

fills me inside,
I must follow is this what you said for now?
is this what you want to see?
this is going to tick me off, i will not agree.

I'm so tired.
suffocation stirs inside of me.
it's out of control.
my mind blinds what my soul should see.

crack my skull.
free to live and breath.
rape your mind-mind will blind your soul.
free your mind-your thoughts will take control.

back to the past will i break at the right time?
feel the pull I'm dragging my frail mind.
act on my thoughts,
I'd end up in jail.

my soul is pure.
my mind is frail.
rape your mind.
why don't you rape your mind?

I was alive, i had no choice.
I cried out loud, no one heard my voice.
I felt all the pain inside, i saw the tears in your eyes.
I wanted to see the light.
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Hollow and Insecure

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 08:37:38 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



--------________-----------------

violence in your soul.
common sense you don't know.
tired of being played.
little boy you're just afraid.

I'm not your enemy.
i know you disagree.
you want to beat me down.
see me on the ground.

close your eyes, see only hate.
anger is a lonely state.
pick on me because I'm weird.
something that you feared.

all this sickness hard to swallow.
eats my insides until I'm hollow.
indecision, fornication, condemnation, to damnation.
this world is a breeding ground.
take a look at the bleeding ground.

adoration, temptation, contemplation, to frustration.
you'll fall apart.
don't drag me down.
you rule this world with a synthetic crown.

kill each other for no reason to go against it,
this is treason.
action, reaction, action, reaction.
all this sickness forced to swallow.

fills me inside,
I must follow is this what you said for now?
is this what you want to see?
this is going to tick me off, i will not agree.

I'm so tired.
suffocation stirs inside of me.
it's out of control.
my mind blinds what my soul should see.

crack my skull.
free to live and breath.
rape your mind-mind will blind your soul.
free your mind-your thoughts will take control.

back to the past will i break at the right time?
feel the pull I'm dragging my frail mind.
act on my thoughts,
I'd end up in jail.

my soul is pure.
my mind is frail.
rape your mind.
why don't you rape your mind?

I was alive, i had no choice.
I cried out loud, no one heard my voice.
I felt all the pain inside, i saw the tears in your eyes.
I wanted to see the light.




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Re: Hollow and Insecure (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 08:57:53 PM AEST
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good poem.. i like the emotion it it. and the anger. you let it all out well and good. I really liked it. keep up the good work! and i wish you luck!

~sprints


Re: Hollow and Insecure (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 04:39:49 AM AEST
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Yeh this is an emotional one alright. I am really sorry for the way people treat you & i agree that the world is cruel and harsh. Whatever is unfamiliar or different, people reject. So i can very much relate.

I loved this poem and I hope you fight these people, because you are a brilliant poem and brilliant person.

All the best to you.


Re: Hollow and Insecure (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 07:15:00 AM AEST
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Wow!
U said a mouthfull there.
Great writing.
huggs,
emy


Re: Hollow and Insecure (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 04:10:55 PM AEST
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That was powerful. You have a very wise mind. Great job!




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