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These feelings that I have
I’ve never felt anything like it before
I think that I’m falling in love.

You may not feel the same
But I can’t control my heart
Why must this be so complicated?
I am too weak for this.

Why couldn’t I be falling for someone
Who actually loves me back?
My heart is becoming my new enemy
It has betrayed me for the last time.

I wish that you could see and feel
How much I really do love you.
Maybe then you would change your mind
And want to be with me too.

I know that you don’t mean to hurt me
But it’s hard for me not to feel pain over this.
You are a really good friend and it’ll stay that way
But I can’t help wanting more.

I wish that I could control this
For your sake and my own
I am fighting this battle with my heart
Knowing that I have already lost.
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Falling

Contributed by Aaralyn on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 01:08:03 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I don’t know what it is
These feelings that I have
I’ve never felt anything like it before
I think that I’m falling in love.

You may not feel the same
But I can’t control my heart
Why must this be so complicated?
I am too weak for this.

Why couldn’t I be falling for someone
Who actually loves me back?
My heart is becoming my new enemy
It has betrayed me for the last time.

I wish that you could see and feel
How much I really do love you.
Maybe then you would change your mind
And want to be with me too.

I know that you don’t mean to hurt me
But it’s hard for me not to feel pain over this.
You are a really good friend and it’ll stay that way
But I can’t help wanting more.

I wish that I could control this
For your sake and my own
I am fighting this battle with my heart
Knowing that I have already lost.




Copyright © Aaralyn ... [ 2005-06-17 01:08:03]
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Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Lurking_Shadow on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 01:59:34 AM AEST
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wow...this poem is really nice! I understand your pain, it has happend to me before. I really like the ending, though sad, but true. I'm sorry you're going through this. Hope he'll someday realize he loves you back.
~Lurking_Shadow (a.k.a. Karla)


Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 03:08:33 AM AEST
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yea wow its a he thought it was for a her lol good write tho




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