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Array ( [sid] => 98343 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blue Tears of no Tomorrow [time] => 2005-06-17 01:06:16 [hometext] => plz comment... thanx.......... ~jennie* [bodytext] => surrounded by shadows
covered in lies
pools of blue tears
come from my eyes
thoughtless in doubt
complete serenity
life undefined
no identity
my head spins with pain
my heart throbs with sorrow
my hand grips a knife
be there no tomorrow
pointless life in me
i must fade away
breath be gone
live not past today [comments] => 3 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 13 [informant] => blue_angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Blue Tears of no Tomorrow

Contributed by blue_angel on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 01:06:16 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

surrounded by shadows
covered in lies
pools of blue tears
come from my eyes
thoughtless in doubt
complete serenity
life undefined
no identity
my head spins with pain
my heart throbs with sorrow
my hand grips a knife
be there no tomorrow
pointless life in me
i must fade away
breath be gone
live not past today

Copyright © blue_angel ... [ 2005-06-17 01:06:16]
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Re: Blue Tears of no Tomorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 01:16:58 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: Blue Tears of no Tomorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 05:21:40 PM AEST
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My wonderfully talented friend, I wish you didn't write such sad poetry. You are such an exceptional example of today's youth and I know that there is a radiant person behind the poetry. You write it well, of course, and your blog has things going well for you. I guess it's just what you write so well. (I hope I'm getting this right). But when you say:
pointless life in me
i must fade away
I have to protest. Simply not true!

Re: Blue Tears of no Tomorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 09:22:40 PM AEST
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please don't say that stuff. i hate it when you do. i could cry right now... and you know what that takes... i'm missing M.A.E. madly right now, i'm thinking about poor E.R.F., i'm really mad at someone too, and i'm sorry, jennie... but i don't want to have to worry about you. and i seriously could cry... but i'm sticking to my My Tears poem. please, don't give up jennie. i don't want to have to miss M.A.E. and you!!! it was a good write though!! take care!

~sprints

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