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Array ( [sid] => 98314 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just a bit closer [time] => 2005-06-16 22:27:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I went through alot in my childhood.
I went through pain and agony,
When I grew up. I still had to learn.
me.

I wanted so much love and attention growing up.
I just had to do without,
Then when I grew up, I found myself,
Struggling for help.

I questioned everyone,
I wondered why,
I asked how come,
I said they lied.

Bottom line I had to relize they love me.

On the spiritual side of me,
I knew God way back then,
But then I needed to think about it again.

I treated him the same way,
I question him as well,
I didn't know fully in my heart,
I didn't know He loved me,
I couldn't tell.

But now I am a bit closer to learning,
Now I am a bit closer it is so real,
That He loves me so much.
Now I can really tell..

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 422 [topic] => 54 [informant] => nhisname2005 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )

Just a bit closer

Contributed by nhisname2005 on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:27:52 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

I went through alot in my childhood.
I went through pain and agony,
When I grew up. I still had to learn.
me.

I wanted so much love and attention growing up.
I just had to do without,
Then when I grew up, I found myself,
Struggling for help.

I questioned everyone,
I wondered why,
I asked how come,
I said they lied.

Bottom line I had to relize they love me.

On the spiritual side of me,
I knew God way back then,
But then I needed to think about it again.

I treated him the same way,
I question him as well,
I didn't know fully in my heart,
I didn't know He loved me,
I couldn't tell.

But now I am a bit closer to learning,
Now I am a bit closer it is so real,
That He loves me so much.
Now I can really tell..

Copyright © nhisname2005 ... [ 2005-06-16 22:27:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Just a bit closer (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:38:41 PM AEST
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Awesome!
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Just a bit closer (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 04:34:21 PM AEST
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I nice write about finding who you are and who He is...

Carol

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