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Array ( [sid] => 98300 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hopeless Transformation (I am becoming...) [time] => 2005-06-16 20:59:57 [hometext] => Ever realised you weren't strong? [bodytext] => I thought that hope could radiate
From this weary old existence
Yet I find myself becoming empty
Despite my heart’s persistence

Reaching out for the untouched
Groping for God’s sacred sign
Forgiveness for my bloody wrist
A healing of despair’s scarred line

In such tender years
I am surrounded by all things tragic
Obsessed with death’s end
For living pervades no magic

Watch me furiously cry
Can you see my private pain?
That lets go for but a minute
Only to then haunt me again

Misguided and without a path
Life is profoundly useless
And I find myself becoming
Ever more fearful and useless.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 448 [topic] => 61 [informant] => pUnKa_RaCh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Hopeless Transformation (I am becoming...)

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 08:59:57 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I thought that hope could radiate
From this weary old existence
Yet I find myself becoming empty
Despite my heart’s persistence

Reaching out for the untouched
Groping for God’s sacred sign
Forgiveness for my bloody wrist
A healing of despair’s scarred line

In such tender years
I am surrounded by all things tragic
Obsessed with death’s end
For living pervades no magic

Watch me furiously cry
Can you see my private pain?
That lets go for but a minute
Only to then haunt me again

Misguided and without a path
Life is profoundly useless
And I find myself becoming
Ever more fearful and useless.

Copyright Â© pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2005-06-16 20:59:57]
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Re: Hopeless Transformation (I am becoming...) (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:04:54 PM AEST
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Ah...wow, this is so dark and sad yet still so beautiful, very very well written piece of poetry, you are getting better, even if you do not believe so ; ]

~Clark

Re: Hopeless Transformation (I am becoming...) (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:38:31 PM AEST
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A masterpeice even tho it's sad.
One can feel the moments of desparation and helplessness.
U may think you're not strong but a person that can write like this is much more strong than u think.
Luv, huggs, prayer, strength, joy, peace,
emy

Re: Hopeless Transformation (I am becoming...) (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 01:37:40 PM AEST
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Oh sweety, I have thought I was at the end of my rope so many times, but there is an inner strength in us that if we just pull it out, we can make it through life. Life can be hard, and seem unjust, but the universe has a plan for everyone. In this universe there is also beauty that if you open your heart and spiritual plane you will see all of it. Every day that we wake and breathe we have been given a gift. Don't let it go to waste. rita

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