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Array ( [sid] => 98283 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Insanity [time] => 2005-06-16 19:00:20 [hometext] => Poor Poor Jenna [bodytext] => Reailty gone
Past is present
Dwelling on old emotions

Jumbled mind
No sense of time
Believing ones own lies

Body tattered
Jittery movements
No real care for life

Reality removed
Insanity consumed
Lack of dreams and ambitions

Sleep deprived
Malnourished at times
Always wanting more

Weak and frail
No inncocence to prevail
Heading for disaster

Help is needed
Life is cheated
Unknowingly dying slowly

Loss of mind
No sense of time
Gone from reality

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Insanity

Contributed by dorkfish on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 07:00:20 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Reailty gone
Past is present
Dwelling on old emotions

Jumbled mind
No sense of time
Believing ones own lies

Body tattered
Jittery movements
No real care for life

Reality removed
Insanity consumed
Lack of dreams and ambitions

Sleep deprived
Malnourished at times
Always wanting more

Weak and frail
No inncocence to prevail
Heading for disaster

Help is needed
Life is cheated
Unknowingly dying slowly

Loss of mind
No sense of time
Gone from reality

Copyright © dorkfish ... [ 2005-06-16 19:00:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by Rikki on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 12:02:56 AM AEST
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This is so sad because I am a recovering addict, and I know how it feels to be the addict, and to see someone you care about waste away. What's even worse is watching yourself waste away and no one taking notice. Good writing, Rikki

Re: Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 08:50:14 AM AEST
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Very nice poem, very descriptive and full of feeling.

Great write,
--amanda--

Re: Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by boobiepeach on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 04:11:52 PM AEST
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hey i know jenna!
good one.
we have seen to many people go down this road.

peaches

Re: Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 01:04:40 PM AEST
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A very good write and very well worded. Life is hard and does feel this way all to much. I know this feeling all to well over here in Iraq. take care and keep your head up....Steve

Re: Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by burningintherain14 on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 02:55:42 PM AEST
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Great poem I must say! I can relate to it somewhat. Keep up the good work! Love Always and Forever-x- Heather

Re: Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:00:36 PM AEST
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Good job Fish...I like the last two stanzas especially...So sad. I hope this person is doing better, and sees you for the caring friend you are...

Scorp.

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