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Array ( [sid] => 9827 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => WHAT SHOULD I DO? [time] => 2003-01-06 00:00:00 [hometext] => i would like for all of ya'll to read this and rate and if you can leave a little comment of advice!

wrote for dustin and his ex amanda!

i still love you dustin!!! [bodytext] => could it be,that he's gone now
could it be forever?
all that i asked
is for us to be together!
~~~~~~~~~~~
i fell into love
and now i can't climb out
could it be Amanda he wants
that i can't figure out!
~~~~~~~~~~~
he told me i'm the only one
but could that really be true
cause he gave up me for Amanda
and now i am felling blue!
~~~~~~~~~~~
but then we got back together
he promised he didn't like her
but i still don't believe him
cause all they did that night was flirt!
~~~~~~~~~~~
but i am praying
that we stay together
because if we don't
she's gonna be gone forever!
~~~~~~~~~~~
why when she lefted
he followed her out the door?
you wanna really know what i think
she's a stupid,punk a** whore!
~~~~~~~~~~~
she might can hurt me
but when it comes to my man
all i gotta do,
is hold up my ***** hand!
~~~~~~~~~~~
then she can't mess with me
cause i will lay her a** out
because when it comes to my man
that's what the fights about!
~~~~~~~~~~~
my man thinks,
that she can kick my a**
but if that b**** messes with me
she be laying under the grass!
~~~~~~~~~~~
i'll ***** kill her
as quick as you can blink your eye
cause when it comes to my man
you ain't gettin' by!
~~~~~~~~~~~
this is now mine
so get the **** back
because i'm his only girl
and that's the ***** fact
~~~~~~~~~~~
if you do,like you did b****
i'll be kickin your a**
you are just ***** off
cause your pit stop he passed!
~~~~~~~~~~~
he's at this pit stop now b****
so leave him the ***** alone
close your d*** legs
and go screw the ***** phone!
~~~~~~~~~~~
cause you ain't gettin him back
so kiss your a** goodbye
cause if you come back
your a** is gonna die!
~~~~~~~~~~~
so stay the ***** away
and let us have each other
and this will be the end
of this ***** letter!!!!!!
~~~~~~~~~~~
i hope my man learned something
because if he didn't he will
because if they flirt like that again
her a** is gonna be killed!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 307 [topic] => 6 [informant] => poetry_and_love_bug [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
WHAT SHOULD I DO?

Contributed by poetry_and_love_bug on Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



could it be,that he's gone now
could it be forever?
all that i asked
is for us to be together!
~~~~~~~~~~~
i fell into love
and now i can't climb out
could it be Amanda he wants
that i can't figure out!
~~~~~~~~~~~
he told me i'm the only one
but could that really be true
cause he gave up me for Amanda
and now i am felling blue!
~~~~~~~~~~~
but then we got back together
he promised he didn't like her
but i still don't believe him
cause all they did that night was flirt!
~~~~~~~~~~~
but i am praying
that we stay together
because if we don't
she's gonna be gone forever!
~~~~~~~~~~~
why when she lefted
he followed her out the door?
you wanna really know what i think
she's a stupid,punk a** whore!
~~~~~~~~~~~
she might can hurt me
but when it comes to my man
all i gotta do,
is hold up my ***** hand!
~~~~~~~~~~~
then she can't mess with me
cause i will lay her a** out
because when it comes to my man
that's what the fights about!
~~~~~~~~~~~
my man thinks,
that she can kick my a**
but if that b**** messes with me
she be laying under the grass!
~~~~~~~~~~~
i'll ***** kill her
as quick as you can blink your eye
cause when it comes to my man
you ain't gettin' by!
~~~~~~~~~~~
this is now mine
so get the **** back
because i'm his only girl
and that's the ***** fact
~~~~~~~~~~~
if you do,like you did b****
i'll be kickin your a**
you are just ***** off
cause your pit stop he passed!
~~~~~~~~~~~
he's at this pit stop now b****
so leave him the ***** alone
close your d*** legs
and go screw the ***** phone!
~~~~~~~~~~~
cause you ain't gettin him back
so kiss your a** goodbye
cause if you come back
your a** is gonna die!
~~~~~~~~~~~
so stay the ***** away
and let us have each other
and this will be the end
of this ***** letter!!!!!!
~~~~~~~~~~~
i hope my man learned something
because if he didn't he will
because if they flirt like that again
her a** is gonna be killed!!!!!!!!!!!!!





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Re: WHAT SHOULD I DO? (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 07:53:18 AM AEST
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Violence never solves anything....this is sad because i can feel the pain this causes you but i think you have more anger within yourself than anything...I think you should probably take a look at the gestures, comments, movements, and time spent with you from him more than anything and talk about how you feel with him....i can clearly say from being cheated on before....that if he wants Amanda....he will have her....and nothing you say or do will change that....those are my thoughts....i hope things get better for you soon....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: WHAT SHOULD I DO? (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 08:34:07 AM AEST
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This is good but fighting doesn't really do anything I learned. Just let him now that your not messing around about the peom.




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