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Heart swelled at just mere thoughts
Entwined, our climax heightened
My inner secrets caught
To love you was forever,
I gave myself to thee
I was at your mercy
If only you could see,
But, you thought that you could handle
A lover on the side
I blew out all our candles
My respect for you had died
I gaze upon the mantle
At your newly widowed bride. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 556 [topic] => 43 [informant] => AliB [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

My Love

Contributed by AliB on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 03:14:25 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

My love for you deepened
Heart swelled at just mere thoughts
Entwined, our climax heightened
My inner secrets caught
To love you was forever,
I gave myself to thee
I was at your mercy
If only you could see,
But, you thought that you could handle
A lover on the side
I blew out all our candles
My respect for you had died
I gaze upon the mantle
At your newly widowed bride.

Copyright © AliB ... [ 2005-06-16 15:14:25]
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Re: My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 04:06:19 PM AEST
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For a poem you didn't try your best at , this came out really really good.

It was a convincing piece which i'll give you credit for. Nicely done AliB.

Jane xoxox

Re: My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:46:55 PM AEST
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well...for not trying you did a remarkable job.

I especially like the first two lines. Beautifully written.

Good job!

Re: My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 07:57:52 AM AEST
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This was an outstanding poem for not trying too hard! Great job I liked it a lot.

--amanda--

Re: My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by boobiepeach on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 05:34:46 PM AEST
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i loved this. wonderful write.
i especially liked.......
At your newly widowed bride

it has so many depths

nat

Re: My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 05:46:23 PM AEST
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That was GREAT!

Re: My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 02:20:02 PM AEST
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Glad you got good marks, considering you didnt try this is very good, nice use of emotion.

Hope you are well

Love Dawny

Re: My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by althea_kendry on Thursday, 13th March 2008 @ 06:55:23 AM AEST
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i cnt imagine wat this poem woulda been like if u'd actually tried because this was absolutely amazin!! ur a great writer n i love th feelin i can c behind th words

i actually laughed (which dsnt happen a lot) at th last line .. newly widowed bride .. hahaha in a sadistic way tht seems reli reli funny to me .. like sweet revenge in a twisted way .... maybe tht's just me ....

anyway i loved th poem :)

continue writin!!!

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