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Array ( [sid] => 98247 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Loser [time] => 2005-06-16 11:42:01 [hometext] => I lost my burst of hope [bodytext] => What do you do when you lose?
When you've hit rock bottem
Weighed down with all the abuse

Whom can you turn to for aid?
When everyone's your enemy
And your faith begins to fade

"Nothing can help you now" says he
"Why don't you leave this earth...
And come to me?"

"You practically have no choice
No one supports you
You've lost your voice"

And then the tears begin to fall
You don't even know what's wrong
Suicide begins to call

You realize you've lost it all
No one can save you
The blood begins to fall

So what do you do when you fail?
Slit your wrist and get on with your death
No more would you have to ail [comments] => 4 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 32 [informant] => upomik [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Loser

Contributed by upomik on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:42:01 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

What do you do when you lose?
When you've hit rock bottem
Weighed down with all the abuse

Whom can you turn to for aid?
When everyone's your enemy
And your faith begins to fade

"Nothing can help you now" says he
"Why don't you leave this earth...
And come to me?"

"You practically have no choice
No one supports you
You've lost your voice"

And then the tears begin to fall
You don't even know what's wrong
Suicide begins to call

You realize you've lost it all
No one can save you
The blood begins to fall

So what do you do when you fail?
Slit your wrist and get on with your death
No more would you have to ail

Copyright © upomik ... [ 2005-06-16 11:42:01]
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Re: Loser (User Rating: 1 )
by imagenuinefake on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:52:02 AM AEST
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That's good. I love all your poems...I've read the three your wrote today. They are loverly.

Re: Loser (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:46:59 PM AEST
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Amazing talent for words and rhyme!!! everything in this flow strong from beginning to the end...hope everything looks for ya and keep writing!! dw

Re: Loser (User Rating: 1 )
by Sherah on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 01:35:39 PM AEST
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The form of your Poem was good. I can't imagine feeling this way, and I hope that you don't.... Keep writing.....

Re: Loser (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 04:56:54 PM AEST
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Man, I can relate to this...Hang in there. You did an excellent job with this poem.
Scorp.

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