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and told her all my scars
were deeper than the knife
could ever stab at stars

i broke into her eyes
and let the wet tears free
they dripped into the skies
then fell back unto me

i broke into her soul
and saw the house of cards
i'll play to make her whole
so she won't break into shards

then.. the tables turned...

she broke into my heart
and demanded all my pain
be like paper torn apart
then left out in the rain....

dw

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Love broke into my heart...

Contributed by In_a_While on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:28:59 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

i broke into her life
and told her all my scars
were deeper than the knife
could ever stab at stars

i broke into her eyes
and let the wet tears free
they dripped into the skies
then fell back unto me

i broke into her soul
and saw the house of cards
i'll play to make her whole
so she won't break into shards

then.. the tables turned...

she broke into my heart
and demanded all my pain
be like paper torn apart
then left out in the rain....

dw

Copyright Â© In_a_While ... [ 2005-06-16 10:28:59]
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Re: Love broke into my heart... (User Rating: 1 )
by imagenuinefake on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:52:17 AM AEST
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That's a loverly poem! Plenty of talent!! Pure talents!

Re: Love broke into my heart... (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:45:45 PM AEST
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Very sad and deep.
well done on this.

Re: Love broke into my heart... (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 01:17:59 PM AEST
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Most definitely a good write on this one bro. The ending was awesome and as you know I love a good write with a strong ending. You have out done yourself on this one. Great choice of words and it flowed very smooth. I read the last stanza like 4 times it was really good and put a warm feeling of joy and pain in my heart as I read it. It feels awesome when you find someone who can set your pain free like this. Good write my friend and much love always, your friend….Steve

Re: Love broke into my heart... (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 05:15:28 PM AEST
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Well done Dwayne!! This is really well worded. I can see you put a lot of thought and effort into this write...Great job.
Scorp.

Re: Love broke into my heart... (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 07:18:31 PM AEST
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Very well done. This shows talent. Very nice your tansition was beautiful and full of impact. Great write! I loved it.

--amanda--

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