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Should they stay
Or should they go?
This I really do not know.

Once they come
You wish you were dead.
They blind your sight
So you put up a fight,
You try to be strong, push them back.
Just to stay alive.

But once they are gone
You only feel like you're dead.
Strong - you aren't
And you try everything, to get them to start.
Just to feel again.

So should we cry?
I'm just not sure
Either way you look at it
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Tears Or Not: Life Is A Blur

Contributed by xXcrossedXx on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 07:28:03 AM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

Tears,
Should they stay
Or should they go?
This I really do not know.

Once they come
You wish you were dead.
They blind your sight
So you put up a fight,
You try to be strong, push them back.
Just to stay alive.

But once they are gone
You only feel like you're dead.
Strong - you aren't
And you try everything, to get them to start.
Just to feel again.

So should we cry?
I'm just not sure
Either way you look at it
Life is just a blur.

Copyright © xXcrossedXx ... [ 2005-06-16 07:28:03]
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Re: Tears Or Not: Life Is A Blur (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 08:16:39 AM AEST
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xXcrossedXx

There's a time for everything under the sun.
A time to cry
A time to die
Enjoy life not question why
You are right I am sure
Life is but a blur

I liked your poem
Sinned

Re: Tears Or Not: Life Is A Blur (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 08:54:20 AM AEST
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another good Job Amanda, crying really doesnt do anything for anyone, cuz once the tears have gone, the pain is still there, great job

~Clark

Re: Tears Or Not: Life Is A Blur (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:41:06 PM AEST
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Tears! tears! who can muster
All the all the many tears tat flow
Gleaming in their dew drop luster
And as gems and jewels glow.

Tears tears are precious and infinitely valuable
Redeptive.
Thanks Amanda for bringing this up.
Be blessed
Elizabeth

Re: Tears Or Not: Life Is A Blur (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 10:18:03 AM AEST
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We do relate! Tears cause life to be a blur, but dang they feel good when they occur! Write on my friend! !joni!

Re: Tears Or Not: Life Is A Blur (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 09:55:50 PM AEST
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Nice conclusion you've come to here, as there's little other way to explain the world we live in, really. Maybe it's all a blur because it's going so fast? lol well I'm pretty sure that's not the case, but coincidentally, as I was reading this poem, a song i love called "tears of pearls" started to play. I'm not sure why I mentioned that, so I'll get back to the poem now, lol. But yes anyways, that idea of wanting to cry just to feel again was really the most striking part of this write. it cried out to me the most because it has a sense of an addiction to life, and doing anything to rekindle what is believed to be dead. It was truly a beautiful idea, and quite impressive. Well done here Amanda!

Re: Tears Or Not: Life Is A Blur (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 10:33:18 PM AEST
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i think that this could really have had more of a reason for it being written. this isnt like some of your others that seem to have a profound reason for being written, and i think once you master that part of your writing, you will be at a new peak. why else, do some writers make it, and some dont? they had a reason to write and to be read.

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