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An invisible world and an invisible line.
To show no mercy; to feel no pain,
To reap to soe the bodies you have lain.
A life without power and a life without shame,
Is anyone really to blame?
No life here really now exists,
All thats left is the road that never ends and always twists.
So long and narrow the road goes on and on,
Forever twisting, and forever lasting till every soul is gone.
When it rains it pours but not water, but tears,
Everyone looks away, but only to find new fears.
Prolonged thoughts of death and of life,
Now I take control to end this piteous strife.
To save the willing and ban the untrusted!

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The Blame

Contributed by brokenfire77 on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 09:39:16 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Lost in space and lost in time,
An invisible world and an invisible line.
To show no mercy; to feel no pain,
To reap to soe the bodies you have lain.
A life without power and a life without shame,
Is anyone really to blame?
No life here really now exists,
All thats left is the road that never ends and always twists.
So long and narrow the road goes on and on,
Forever twisting, and forever lasting till every soul is gone.
When it rains it pours but not water, but tears,
Everyone looks away, but only to find new fears.
Prolonged thoughts of death and of life,
Now I take control to end this piteous strife.
To save the willing and ban the untrusted!

Copyright © brokenfire77 ... [ 2005-06-15 21:39:16]
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Re: The Blame (User Rating: 1 )
by PHISHBATES on Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 03:41:48 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed this write, i will look into your others

Re: The Blame (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 02:31:39 PM AEST
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inspration! it just pops in ur head when u least x-pect it. i know how it is. it hit me once while i was showering! thank god i was alone! i jumped out(!) and found wutever i found infront of me that i could write on! (The piano man came from that)

anyway. it was a great read. thanx 4 getting up and writting it!

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